To put this very simply, if you want slice-of-life, nonsensical shenanigan moments, this book should keep you very entertained most of the time.
not bad but not my cup of tea good luck ..
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Hi, I would like to inform you that this is the same as the 'Rebirth: leading families to survive in the apocalypse' if I remember correctly. I didn't really read properly, only the synopsis and the first chapter which is the same as the translated novel. just fyi..
Such a good start , the first chapter is like a philosophical verse , I liked the MC way of thinking , he keeps it simple keep up bro
really like the story but no updates for so long ?
Great book!! I’m enjoying reading it a lot. Thank you Author for a great story so far. Only thing I can note at the moment is that it needs proof reading, due to spelling mistakes and grammatical errors etc. Otherwise it’s great!
nice work keep going I'll just reviewing it
Well, what can I say. This is an absolute gem, I came here expecting silver but instead got diamond. A diamond in the rough.The English is well written and there are almost zero errors (atleast to where I have read), the characters are well portrayed, the explanations are vivid enough that you can directly envision them in your mind. For now, there is only six chapters and these six are absolutely awesome.Keep the good work going author and I wish your writing quality remains not only remains thesame, but also improves.
Changed the book title and cover to the paper/hardcover version since it’s completed. This is a raw manuscript so forgive the grammar please.
First off Super amazing plot with tons of potential. But when it come to the MC I often wonder if he has a brain in that head of his. He doesn’t try to make full use of his future knowledge especially when it’s most needed in the beginning. He has to come up with a new invention that even the future doesn’t have in order to make money, (BTW it’s an invention that is way overpriced) instead of using one of the thousands of invention that were made in the next 1500 years. Overall I hope you can give the MC a big IQ boost and let him take advantage of his future knowledge a lot more. Also you should check out the book “END OF THE MAGIC ERA” for inspiration and examples of a smart mc, cuz it has the same plot as this novel.
Raw?