A must read!!! The POV switching may get awhile to be used too but its definitely worth it!!I especially enjoy seeing Quinn’s POV more as I find the military and the characters at that side more interesting... And Its exciting to learn more about the war and those eccentric hollows!!The fight scenes are also very well written as well!!Keep it up author!!
While the power he has through his game seems good, it is destroyed by this novel. This novel is basically DBZ. Almost the entire novel at this point is spent on one fight. It was almost 20 chapters! It should've been just one! Very disappointing. This novel isn't even about the power to raise actresses. It's about a fight with an arrogant young master.
Really well written story and a unique world building.Its like a futuristic cyberpunk but with mysterious powers in the blend.That said, the scenes of carnage are just described using a few words. It can be expanded upon to make people feel the impact. And the paragraphing should be done properly..shorter paragraphs would be easier to read and floow.Keep up the great work
When i read the first chapter, it immediately caught my heart.And when I keep on reading this novel, I find a very interesting plot.Don't sell your soul to the devil.
This novel has a good plot development and every chara is pretty interesting. It is easy to read and catch up to, so refreshing; nice to fill the free time.But one thing that misses in this novel... why u didn't put a "comedy" tag, author? I laugh several times srsly hahaha LIBE IS SO CUTE AND HER ACTION TO HIRO KILLS ME ??
Amazing story. The most unique thing about this story is that it is written by a Pakistani and written in Pakistani style. Good luck author in writing more novels in future
Solid pick based on 102 chapters. The author improved after his last novel. While this one's pace is also slow and down to the ground, the MC there seems to have a better personality, earns things by himself instead of being indebted/burdened by clan, he gets his action time and comes out with a satisfying result, the side characters such as the girl are more interesting too and could indeed make up for interesting relations and situations years later. Author's interesting note after chapter 102:,,As I said in the previous chapter, I abandoned a lot of constraints to write this book, and wrote it completely according to my own ideas, and I will no longer be influenced by anyone's opinions!If you don’t like to read it, you think it’s poisonous here, and there’s something unreasonable, please do it yourself. The starting point is such a large library, you can always find something that suits your heart. Or you can try to write a book you want, saying Maybe it will be a hit, and it will be a mortal one!I am actually very disgusted that some people say that my plot is unreasonable here, and there are many loopholes, because I am actually very concerned about the rationality of the plot and the self-consistency of logic. People who say this will make me more angry than directly scolding me for throwing on the street. Makes me feel like an insult to my writing!In the previous episodes of Lin Xiaoe, one by one shouted poison, and shouted that the little white dog gave up the book, and I laughed. I have read books for so many years, I don't know that there are many books with this kind of plot?But how many books did I deal with later?And I think this plot is handled very well, because she is used as a point to give the protagonist the first magic weapon, some life-saving charms, medicinal pills, including the following charts, which opens up a new situation, and more later Do a good job of the outline of the new plot.This kind of writing with dots and lines is exactly what I am good at and what I like.The so-called old bottle of new wine, the development of online literature to the present, if you want to say who has written a plot, no one else has written it before, that is impossible, and the creator can only slightly modify and innovate some plots.Just like domestic music, it is not because the predecessors have written all the lyrics and tunes that are easy to create, and now it is more and more difficult to introduce such classic songs.Besides, why is the protagonist an aboriginal?In the first two books, I chose a transmigrator protagonist, and then I found that although a transmigrator is easy to arouse readers' approval at first, the disadvantages will appear as the plot unfolds later.Once the protagonist encounters someone who wants to plot against him, but the protagonist doesn't see it, many readers will jump out and say that the protagonist is stupid, why is it so easy to trust people, and it's a transmigrator, they don't know anything!I really don't know how to explain it!Are there many examples of being deceived in reality? How many people who think they are smart don't know when they are being lied to?There is a good joke that you are not deceived, just because you are not worth being deceived.When those professional liars really want to deceive you face to face, you can't prevent it!Today's novel readers, many of them read a lot of books, they all know astronomy and geography, and know everything about ancient and modern China and foreign countries, and they are all transparent about the world. In their eyes, the protagonist of the transmigrator should be like this.But I really want to ask a question, even if you pass through and get the golden finger, can you really understand people's hearts? Then you can see from someone else's word or action that someone wants to hurt you? Then immediately preemptively kill others?There is no doubt that God's perspective is cool, but in the Xianxia world, especially in the mortal world view of Xianxia, God's perspective has become an obstacle that greatly affects the author's writing, at least for me.So I chose a native who would persuade many people at the beginning, an aboriginal who grew up from an orphan, an aboriginal protagonist who would make mistakes, correct them, and learn from them."
Finally there's a Author who not only have Fantastic writing skills but Actually Completes her Novels once she starts them... I applause you!.....??
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Stopped reading at chapter 63 (almost all of the free chapters) and my verdict is that this story is.....annoying.Annoying in that the author is constantly teasing readers by not revealing the ML's status to everyone this whole time. The reason it's annoying is because a person that is as stupidly stubborn towards their own family as the FML exists. And she has a husband who has the power to fix all the problems, but loves her so much that he wants her to show everyone what she is made of. So the problem is that the characters are realistic, and that they've just been running around this problem for so long now, all so that the author can write in face-slapping events. IMO, since he wants her to show how great she is to everyone, it could still be easily solved by publicizing his status, and then giving her free reign over her own companies to spread her wings.Other than that, the story starts off a bit awkwardly in that it doesn't talk about his coming-up story, and although not perfect, there are very few grammatical errors, so it isn't hard to read. The world is a mix of modern day and fantasy, with mentions of modern companies and whatnot
Story was good until he had to save that girl, horrible translation needs better grammar, but Yeah overall a good story with a unique storyline.
excellent storyI love it, keep updating regularly, I can't wait to do the rest.good perssonage constructionupdate more remember please because I love this kind of novel