intresting!! concept is very good and with those small details you can feel that the world is alive, got me hooked on the chapter one, can't wait to read more.
The novel is amazing, you he a great storyline there author. please more updates ?
What can i say other than superb? This book is a masterpiece in the making. If you want a system novel with fresh ideas and unique takes on things then this is the book for you. ??
This is one of the best novels I've read on the platform, the pacing is good, the investment in the main character it gives me is nice, and the tension and build up of the story is amazingly good. All it needs is more chapters and a few grammar fixes here and there for me to call it a 5/5. Good job on this one Author I'm expecting more cool things out of this and from you, keep doing what you're doing ?
May you always have inspiration and a good beverage while writing.
Amazing and interesting ? highly recommend love it
It's an okay start. The content is extremely similar to The Castle Of All People: The Only Random Army Angel At The Beginning Of The Game a few years back though.
"Hey! Share" i said.
"Professor Li? I just read your mail and called you immediately. I am the person who sent you the Wakandan Shield project." Ling Yun said.
Later Mini and Chif went to chif's cabin
"Tapi Ayah tidak merasa nyaman dengan ini"
I said yep what a concept