For referenece, im currently on chapter 89 out of 730ish. I feel like I've read enough to get the general vibe of the novel.
So far, I have a lot of mixed feelings about this novel. I'm going to list my pro's and con's and if I don't drop this I'll come back and update this review.
Pros:
- Unlike other system novels, the system doesn't baby the protagonist. He has to figure thing out himself for the most part, which is refreshing.
- The bloodline powers are really unique so far and I really like how his initial power was upgraded to something useful but not incredibly op. Hopefully the power scaling for him isn't to crazy and he doesnt bulldoze through everything later on.
Cons:
- Everyone from his parents to his classmates are cartoonishly evil. It seems like 90% of the characters in this novel are there so protag has a reason to act edgy and think the worlds against him. For example, I can understand his younger brother acting like a brat and cursing him at every moment because hes a child but his mother doing the same makes no sense in my opinion. If author wanted a "cold/abusive" parent making them treat protag like air/ being extremely distant would make more sense. Instead his mother also reads like an annoying brat despite being an adult...Same thing with school mates. It would have been more believable if only the main 3 bullies in the beginning were after him and everyone else was just distant and cold.
- The protag is way to edgy are certain points. For example, I have no idea why he treats FL horribly from the moment they meet. Its not like they have a bad history, he just seems to hate her for no real reason. I couldn't understand why he slams the door in her face on there second or third meeting...You think since everyone else is so aggressively mean to him he would appreciate who ever is nice to him. Author says its for characters development but an explanation on why hes so edgy in these types of situations is needed for this to even be remotely believable.
I love the idea behind this story. There are some mistakes here and there but not enough to throw you off because you will be drawn in from the first paragraph. One could tell the author is giving her all in this book, and I appreciate her effort. The book is added to library and awaiting new updates. ?
The whole plot was just full of unnatural and unrealistic events that completely ruined the immersion for me. The author just kept on forcing situations and writing bad characters with no motive other than to be cannon fodder for MC to face slap. It's essentially just a very surface level wish fulfillment novel which some people may enjoy so try it if that's your thing but I'd say otherwise you might be better off looking for something else.
ok so quick transition for MC is nice and while there's a fast growth for him it doesn't feel misplaced. incredibly excited to see how things go from here as I'm on chapter 38
Top Quality work , I like how the author lets the Mc do what he wants and letting him go of his regrets by giving him the power to change it by himself .
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A good read, mmorpg novels are one of my favorite genres, if you like it too, you should give this novel a chance. I think it has the potential to be a excellent novel. As I have said in a comment, maybe you should read RSSG, if you haven't yet, to get some inspiration.
I know it's a bit shameless to give myself 5 stars, but I'll still do it.
It's bloody brilliant hope it translates soon.Webnovel has brought pretty brilliant novels this time for pilot read.The concept is new, the cheat is new, and the cultivation system is consistent with a beautifully paced story.
It's a good story. It's an action pack story. Although there's a little grammatical error it's still readable. I recommend this one.
Good luck to this author, more power.
Well written story aimed at sporting enthusiasts using the common trope of reliving a life marred by regrets with a system that rewards effort and achievement with the athletic improvement needed to become the Greatest of All Time. This story is notable more for the execution than the idea, but is no less entertaining for that.
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