this is the fourth novel i caught up in the past few days. the writing could use some redundancy tbh. things get repeated. also the dialougues are sort of predictable. but im liking the progress of it all tho. the plot is neat. there's some solid backup. continue writing
My first time leaving a review on WebNovel and it’s for a book that isn’t even through its 1st arch (2nd arch?). I’ve quickly gotten absorbed into reading this story and I eagerly wait for every chapter. The writing quality and story development is premium. The beauty of ‘System’ stories (like Isekai) is that you have a lot of creative freedom to build a world while retaining relatable functions/characters that draw you in. Damon is definitely a relatable character, and the believability of his character/story development and the development of the supporting characters is perfect. I’m normally not invested in supporting characters as much as I am in this story, but that lends credence to the quality of the writing. If you are just now thinking of reading this book, then don’t hesitate. It’s dark and beautiful, and you’ll find yourself whimsically speeding through chapters.
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"If you are wanting to give grandchildren to our father's you should be eating healthy meals," Killian retorted taking a bite of roasted potatoes.
Human
"He won't care and just smiling hearing the ridicoulus human talking that thing they were smart, but what they know is an illusion that can be true or false.
"Okay, let's have fun kid." the Man try to grab my hand but i slap his hand.
"Angrod saved my honour! If it wasn't for him, I would feel like I had been defiled by that bastard.
"You killed him."
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