Very good, i love the story and the plot, it has great exposure to words overall and its detail to characters and the setting is played very nicely, well done!
Author here?, I'm a new writer who's trying to share his imagination with everyone and make his book land itself a good recognition☺️ in webnovel. That won't be possible without you?.
Why don't you check it out ?? and give me your feedback?.
Hello, Author here with a shameless review. Now that I'm approaching 40 chapters, I thought it would be time to drop a review here.
First off, thank you so much for taking the time to dive into my story! This is my first time writing an original Webnovel, so there may issues regarding worldbuilding, plot etc. I genuinely didn't realise how hard it was to develop things like worldbuilding without info dumping, lets hope I get better with it in the future.
I mentioned this in the synopsis but just to reiterate. there will not be any romance in this story. I learned from writing my fanfic that I'm not built for writing romance.
Additionally, the MC is not reincarnated or transmigrated, he's indigenous to the main world in the story. He starts off as a normal kid, so don't expect him to be ruthless and calculative right from the start- that transformation will happen very soon.
Also, something I didn't mention in the synopsis is that the story will contain world hopping- i.e. the MC will travel to different worlds over the course of the story.
Finally, constructive criticism is of course welcome and encouraged.
Once again, thank you for reading my work. I sincerely hope you enjoy the journey!
The plot is still peak as ever, and the narration improved by a ton! bro is actually starting his villain arc today
This surprisingly has good writing and so far i like how slow the plot is. Thanks author
I really enjoyed this story so far ,it all talked about love ,hatred, struggle, believe and Lot's more. I hope it ends soon pls don't add any suspense after d wedding
The last chapter of this book is 2494 and it was the best!!! I loved this book and it kept me on my toes. I give the book and author 10 stars .... Thank you. Jason finally found the end!
Sizzling & happy reading on all these stories. Definitely fun, hot & emotionally satisfying. Will definitely have to read again!
I read as far as chapter eight because there were too many grammar errors.
The storyline sounds like it could be a great book, and your characters are good, but trying to make sense of the sentences is so distracting. It makes it really hard to understand and enjoy the book.
I so love this book, really felt for all the pain Ryan went through, can't wait for more chapters
im loving it
interesting?