The translation is just terrible .I don't understand why webnovel even bothers to translate a novel if they just post MTL version of the novel.
Great read so far
Keep it up author and release more chapters
For those who like hero stories, this is the story for you. I have read this on Webnovel as well, and like it there, and here.I really like it. It's goofy and fun and I can't wait to see more. Still super early on so my review will probably change as it goes on and gets bigger. For now I like it though. I want more fire force powers so hope we get more from Hope.A very well developed world, several mysteries that are revealed over time, points of view from various characters.There is so much information that I could spend hours writing the review, I recommend giving it a chance, it's really worth the experience. A good story I think.
It's better than the average trial read novel by a lot. The world is interesting, the writing quality is good. Feels so weird to have a good novel in trial read. This category has been plagued by brain-dead stories and tropes and the first 20 chapters of this one looks good. I hope this keeps going and this review doesn't end up looking trollish.
I would love to give this story a million stars. It was more than what I expected. I'm seriously waiting to see what's gonna happen next. The writing quality is perfect and the charater design is great too.
Dropped chapter 22It is to fast paced and Unrealistic causes me to lose interestIf it was another planet and mc was 8 it be more believableBy chapter 22 not clear how much time past but mc has already made 1 million yuan and paid of debtBecame famousAnd has mastered/learnt half dozen recipesYet still wishes to expand options for customers when he works alone
The grammar has drastically improved from before, but it definitely needs more refining. I'd suggest getting an editor to further refine the novel and increase immersion. Additionally, for personal improvement, try using grammar editing apps such as Grammarly. Buying Grammarly premium will definitely further refine your writing and maybe teach you some more grammar.
That aside, the novel is highly interesting and engaging. I'd suggest having the MC improve his battle power, but that's about it.
I've only ready a few chapters of the book and I must say the book is interesting and I've loved it you've got extraordinary writing skill are amazing keep it up and bring more chapters
Shameless Author’s 5 -stars review. This book is going to be a bit different from what I usually write, but I hope you guys will enjoy it nonetheless.
finally a novel where the mc is not a male,i cant find any of these anywhere
Why not? Why not i as the author shamelessly leave 5 star review on my novel.
strong female lead, wolves, sexy, !!!!! i suggest for everyone to read it. it's nice but we need more chapters . i really like it. update more. :)