Girlieeee, upload all the draft but overall I like it and lol the names are familiar.
I just had to leave another review if you have the opportunity please pick up this novel it's just pure excellence and it hasn't even really got started yet and can only get better from here jumping in now would be the wisest choice
mmmmmmmmmm well nice interesting and kind of fresh storyline with some misunderstanding in between hope for more
I would give it 5.0 because i enjoyed it until in the end. Thank you for the novel Author and Translator! :D I think that Leon is best character, he deserved the loves he get!
so far I'm loving all of it. I'm pausing for tonight because I'm heading to bed, but it's amazing, I'm already invested and feeling strong emotions for the main leads, hope it'll be a hea, and I can't wait for more!!!
So far I am loving how the author does things. I have read 2 of his other books and I am happy with his continued writing style and works as he does a great job in making long well thought out novels. Keep up the good work! This is another great addition to your library.
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Yo!! Typical 5-star author review. You can ask me any questions here; I'll answer them for you. There are nearly 70,000 free words to read—give it a shot! If you don’t like it after the free chapters, no worries. But I believe you’ll be hooked.
~I put both good and bad in the reviw so scroll down to see both~Good things~Okay so ive only reas about 40 chapters so far so take with a grain of salt buti thunk the author has a really good idea and good direction she went with the story as a whole and the development while fast makes sense for the Mc. there are also hardly any gramatical errors and that makes reading this story that much smoother. another thing i loved about the story is the evolution part as EoC was one of my favorite books and i thought it had a great system.Bad things~Ive only read about 40 chaps in the story but i wanted to say something. In the story you dont explain all of the skills and what they do like the skills she got from the phonix or some of those from the harpys and i just think its bad world building. i can accept that but the kingdom thing when she got back is just terrible i mean they the people there evolved from not even having anything above stone tools to staight up having lamps and a city in like 10 days. Then there is the whole population issue as the coty should only have around 50-100 people when the non combatants were evacuated before the fight but in just like 3 days since that happened there was unprecedented development. it just dosent make sense in my opinion. another criticism i have is that the pacing is just so incredibly break neck that it makes it hard to follow as it took the mc like 20 days to go from being a chicken to killing a phonix and having a kingdom.
"Okay-okay, now number 3 here, how many human toxid children are on this earth," I said.
And of course the world must have need a villain right? Because I really like to create something complicated, can i who the one that create villain? "