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I just don't like the fate sorcereress sisters. They pretty much get handed everything because of luck they are born with. Unlike Giant Sun Immortal Venerable
The ratings are so bad I gotta give it a shot 6/20
Whats it like??? Worth the read unlike what novelupdates reviews claim
So is He really a generic MC? You can also ask questions about the novels I recommended you, and also you can check out Primal Hunter.
to me martial world is a one of a kind absolute master piece, it had perfect world building, THE most in-depth explanation of the cultivation system, mc was not op, he struggled to climb the ranks from the weakest of corner of the world of the weakest world out of the galaxy and the weakest galaxy out of billions. He did all this and ascended to the top with the power of the cube to help him, reminder that the cube only gave him holy lord techniques so he had to make his own after he ascended to holy lord or above. anyway im about to rant so let me stop rn. martial world to me is like a second life. Complete and absolute immersion during every chapter, it wasnt a "harem" per se but it also had 4 wives that meant a lot to the mc. anyway perfect is the only word i can use to describe martial world and no other novel can hold a candle to it. Martial world deserves some kind of award idk but its so good i cant even describe it. drop this trash and read martial world if you haven't
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Overall the story is pretty solid. Looking forward to see how the world will expand and how the characters develop. Keep up the good work!
The story is just starting out but I seriously love it! Even at the start you can tell that there will be some epic character development as the MC experiences more and interacts with more people. Super excited for this one and definitely recommend giving it a shot!
this is the kind of novel I've been searching for.
I love this author. ALL HAIL GOD KING PANCAKES WITCH. GREATEST AUTHOR OF ALL TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is just personal preference, please don’t take this as criticism on the work.I like this story, I really do. I have some issues with the way the characters are written however. So far I’m at chapter 26. The main characters are cold and unfeeling to the circumstances of the other characters. Quick to resort to the idea of killing other characters before they can do anything wrong. Now this wouldn’t be too strange, but these people were literally highschool students before transmigration. My last issue is that the main characters don’t treat the other side characters as “human”. I know that sounds a little ridiculous considering to them they literally are characters from a game they played, but it’s not really a game anymore. Maybe this changes later in the story but for now it’s really off-putting and I can’t bring myself to read anymore.This next part is criticism for the story. Please understand that this is not malicious. I do wish that the characters were a little more fleshed out. I understand that some parts of a story are intended to be intentionally vague, but I don’t think it works that well for this kind of story. The main characters feel 2 dimensional, like they’re lacking depth in their reasoning. My last criticism is that there is a weird amount of plot convenience. Specifically, the part where it talks about Nathan being an experienced person about knife combat. There was exactly no hint about that character having the experiences of someone who needed to wield a knife in the modern world.Now since I have criticized the story I feel the need to completely certain aspects as well. This is a 4 star review after all. I really enjoyed the concept of this story. The world around them was not really fleshed out that well, but it was written well in the parts where there was World building.Anyway, I hope that you continue writing stories. I look forward to more of your works.
