With honesty. I've read only up to chapter 6. And this review will be based on my impression regarding the story's progress, the MC's character, the world background, the relevance of the content to the plot and the translation.Story wise, it's shaky. The author does not have propriety regarding how to develop a story with a good flow. He keeps on jumping here and there that it made me forget the name of the MC after reading a few chapters because he kept dumping information that should only be introduced a bit sooner but not later while neglecting relevant and important information that should be useful in shaping the concept of the novel which is, "What is a Mech in this novel". If we want to talk about an apple, I think we should first describe how it came to be, what composes it, and how does it taste like before talking about apple candy or an apple pie.The MC's character: He appears to be a resilient, smart, and strong individual while being easily annoyed and a bit negligent at the same time. The world background: Well written but gives off the "I've read this before" vibe. Content wise, it's jam-packed but lacks an essential ingredient. "The Mech/Mechs and its specifications, uses, kinds, types, size, etc.". It's irritating to read a mech novel, wherein there is too much info dump, but the mechs are still vaguely introduced.The translation: is pretty good. Being able to deliver especially translating sci-fi type novel is commendable.I will continue reading it, maybe. I'm a fan of this kind of novels but, I choose what I read. So far, it's not up to the level of "I want to continue to reading it" yet. (I'll be updating this review if I ever got the chance to do so)
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NO SPOILER REVIEW (UPTILL CHAPTER 412) Perfect. everything is perfect. all bad reviews in previous chapters or complaints about the story from various people that i read were sometimes true , but author just keep it very realistic. and the limitations just slowly with new chapters coming turned out to be getting from "ok" to "excellent". the 5 stars are not exaggeration , writing quality is well , stability of chapter update is excellent , story's development is so good i find no fault , everything is realistic. this entire story from getting an army ready to mobilizing them , challenges faced in the process , strategies , i loved it all. some characters were annoying but every character is having a development. its like all of MC'S vassal (side characters) who seems sometimes childish or useless are slowly getting development its like they are bound to get better , which makes me from hating them or getting annoyed by them to getting amazed or feeling good. MC is not an idiot. his entire character is very well written. i had a pleasant read. if you cant decide whether you want to read this or not , i suggest come check out for yourself as you read. it will get better and better. there is no romance , only a sense of responsibility to work hard to achieve what you want which makes it very inspiring. sadly webtoon is not that good. its a pity. this story has potential. i'm excited for future chapters. THANK YOU , TRANSLATER. YOU DO YOUR WORK WELL. i would say one word "masterpiece" there is no other word which can describe this novel. (note : hey tl , i hope you can continue this novel. i would even donate you later , i just love this novel so much)
So the overall story is about mc gaining power in world without any. It's his journey how he uses them, ( for his gain), physical and all. I follow the author online and he said that there will be even stuff related to otherword in future. Anyway, I recommend reading it.
This is a review to let you know what you're getting into. For starters, I want to appreciate those who've left comments and reviews that are helpful. The writing quality isn't top-notch, that I can assure you. I wrote this novel as a bluff, i did not expect it to get this much attention(which i am grateful though) At the moment, I am going back to the first 50 chapters because that's where most of the problems are. I'd appreciate if any of you point out what you'd like to see fixed and rectified.The development, character design and world background get better at chapter 100, but the other chapters are not exactly the best that I can do. For those who have persisted, you have my thanks. Those who are pointing out the issues, I also appreciate you. Thank you for reading the novel and showing this much support.
Definitely an intriguing story, the plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. Will keep reading .
Read the synopsis. It is what it is and it is good. No tinkerbell BS here, just some good dirty times with a generous amount of violence and ego driven narcisism. Top read.
Overpowered MC (and evil one in that) and harem, enough reason to stay in my library?. Well, writing and plot is up to my taste. Waiting for more updates!
muy buena narración me gusto la historia
The story has potential, i like it. Waiting for more chapters ?
Not bad.
Alright I know I'm the author, but I'm going to try my best to do an honest review of my story currently. (Chapter 44 as of writing this)I'll be honest the introduction of my story is not that good, while I'm happy with the prologue and the first arc. I'm not satisfied with how I wrote the first chapter as well as how situations were written, making the MC not the absolute focus point.In the second arc, I'm way more satisfied, the story is progressing way more with actual worldbuilding, not to mention that I'm way more satisfied with the main cast and how the MC is being written. Now, I know 4 stars is a high rating, but I'm doing this because I know that each chapter is going to be better and each arc is going to be exponentially greater in quality and enjoyment. I'll also answer to any questions in the replies in necessary.