It’s good not that bad and look I’m keeping up
A lot of early info dumps and stat screens. gets better as the story goes on.Power system feels...confusing still. MC acts like he should in most cases in my opinion. world building is there. pacing I feel could be sped up slightly. 126 chapters in and it's only been 4 days. but a LOT of shit happens during that time. just.....a LOT of stat screens. truly hope he's able to hold onto his humanity to a certain degree. I also hope Micheal: 1) gets the necro heart thing, 2) ACTUALLY CULTIVATES!! but I really believe this novel is good and could be great. worth the read.
Better translation than expected, I liked the translation, it’s not the typical MTL translation. Please keep translating !
this seems like a good read. i hope it is not harem or sth
uhh some weird sitcom sweep like and subscribe for more
Mr. Author, I have a question and I hope you can answer it. It concerns the coming-of-age ceremony. Did the hero's sisters perform the same ritual, I mean the ritual of getting rid of virginity? Did they bring in several men and let the girls choose who to sleep with? If true, all of his sisters and future harem are not virgins. I hope he gets at least one girl's virginity.
Although I wouldn't say it was the finest novel I've ever read, it was still rather good considering it was your first. The noises were the only thing that bothered me; yes, I realize that you repeated them to let the reader comprehend that they were sounds. I thought some of the laughter was inappropriate, though it may have just been "ha ha" or "haha." Some noises also were. The ticks rather than repeat could of be "the tick repeated over and over again." rathe than tick tick tick tick.
The story is interesting I like how it progresses, you could fair well with more character development or effort towards pacing and characters that are easier to relate to. It's hard to get really into it, but it's not bad. I like it and if anyone is a fan of weak-strong progression, I would assume they'd like it
Pretty good, exactly what i wanted, ADHD power(space filler, space filler, space filler, space filler, space filler, space filler, space filler, space)
I am absolutely OBSESSED with this book. It’s the definitely one of my favorite books on webnovel. Such good detail. Good story outline. Fantastic character development. Characters with heart wrenching back stories. Reminds me of meteor garden, a Netflix cdrama, but honestly better. Going to read more of her work once I’m done with this one.
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wow.. great job author.. interesting story line...I will read it for sure till end...