I like your story! Especially those "What if's". Keep it up!
The writing is a bit all over the place and I hated all of the characters. I gave up early on when the main character was abused then forced and manipulated into forgiving her abuser. Pretty gross.
How dare you talk down such a FABULOUS moustache ?
So it finally got updated...
The mc is completely stupid, he has enough strength not to have to put up with certain insults and stupid characters that he can stay away, but he still remains there being made like a doormat.
345 drop
Good luck to anyone who has the patience to read a door MC.
Ngl I’m liking this LN so far
I f*ck*ng love the slice of life genre
Let's see if this holds up
He's simply evil, the revenge doesn't make sense but he personally did much worse things.
considering dimension where plot is happening, I got a feeling, it is world of long forgotten past,
when you saw film adaptation, and later did read a book is one thing.
But reading for the first time, but seeing it like déjà woo, ... I'm not speaking about plot alone, but build of the world given here.
in "Lord of the rings" classic it is, but world is flat black&white for me,
_"edge of tomorrow" there's a being that cannot be killed, how could you try. Seems hopeless, but actually it's easy to resolve once getting mind right. - sealed it is in time itself.
I see it like people of today's era lost the qualifications to use/feel internal energy because of inability to maintain greed and trying to get it all... and almost extinguishing life.
Which one is ETCL? Couldn't find it with the abbreviation.
The main character speaks like a little child. The storytelling sucks. And the Book is a copy of The Mightiest Leveling System.