electricpun2005
This book is soooo good???❤️❤️❤️.....I could read it all day??✨✨✨✨
It's got a lot of potential but I can't stand the writing style (thats on me). The characters are a bit two-dimensional, they all seem to speak the same (in other words, it's like the author is speaking through them. They aren't quite their own people, ifykwim). I even skipped to the end but it doesn't seem to be fixed.The prose is all right even though it seems befitting for a trad novel. The plot develops at a normal pace. The vibes remind me of JJBA. I do hope the author fixes the formatting since it's hard to read on phone. In any case, I would recommend this book when it's reached a few hundred chapters.Good luck, author
I love the gore and violence. The heartless character of just throwing away those imps like they aren’t anything. I love it, very bloody so cool. And that finale scene after those two cultivation quests, so cool. ????????
the story has a lot of potential. I’m really liking the plot, and the characters are interesting, though they could use a bit more depth to make them stand out even more. Some parts feel a little rushed, so slowing down the pacing could really help. overall I think with a few tweaks, it’ll be even better
The story is growing so well, all the details are correctly connected in each chapter, and i really appreciate for the constant updates, thank you so much author!
The book has an interesting narration cos the story put a smile on my face and I love it. good job to the author..
i Like IT it's pretty good pls contuni To Upload chapters ??
The novel is going pretty smooth hope it keeps up the same pace however I am still waiting for the Maria character described in the synopsis I guess she could be the love interest ?
This story is incredible. The characters are developing in a very bring and clean manner while the plost seems to be deep. It is impressive the quaily of everything and i will certainly keep reading.
Please stop this, please ... someone please help me, please help me ....
"Oh yeah, Kaenjieeeeee!" i answered with a smile.
