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Winter_Iris.Your writing always captivate me.Your writing skills and your ability to draw the readers' attention and capture their hearts is incredible.You are a great writer. You get better each time you write a new novel. Your stories , whether light or dark fascinate me.You have a vivid imagination which you pour into your writing.Your skills amaze me.?I have read two chapters and I know that I am going to love this novel. This is just amazing.Amazing, amazing work!I'm so proud of you.Five stars! ? ? ? ??Keep writing.Always cheering for you.?
The book was quite appealing. Combining rebirth and Video game in a unique and pleasant way made it quite enjoyable. But I kinda wonder, a guy with eidetic memory and was average Joe..??u200d♀️??u200d♀️ That's the first... Maybe that what makes this book intriguing... Loves to read more.
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I was very respectful and careful in my assessment of your story. I had only gotten to either 18 or 20 some chapters in your story before I decided that it was not my cup of tea. the world background was very detailed and contained a lot of explanation which I enjoyed. as for the updating stability I cannot accurately give a rating as I have not personally received an update; for I have only started reading the story recently. your character design is very in-depth, although I did not really get to experience that much of the character I really enjoyed the story. for the story development I gave the highest rating possible for the length of time that I read your story. the writing quality leaves a little bit to be desired as I can easily tell that English is not your first language, or it is your first language and you're just having trouble like me in using grammar. either way it was very entertaining and I looked forward to more stories from you.
Very good concept. Cant wait to see the future of this novel. The concept of the main character having spent thousands of in-game years slaughtering the other players would be a good back drop for making him not be phased by killing as well as making him a patient butcher. W W W I hope to see where you take this novel and i hope it succeeds
I have just started reading it and it got me hooked up . The synopsis itself is so nice. Good job author keep on the good work. I recommend this book
This is a very well planned and written novel. I've read your other works and I have to say you are one of my favorite authors. on a side note. Thank you!!! As a Knicks fan I have to say this for giving us a moment to shine, even if it isn't reality.
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For those who are saddened that this novel was not picked, rejoice! For this novel has had over 100 chapters translated by the independent TL’ers of XianXiaEngine.
Arthur's character development is getting better and better. I didn't expect him to present it in this detail, every side character contributed to Arthur's character change.
Eh.. I guess the story is nice? This is the author’s first time writing, I guess. There are a lot of beginner mistakes but he seems to want to improve and learn so I think people should give him a try and help whenever they can. One meaningful comment can help. But, since I know how people are here, I doubt I’ll see a lot of that. It will probably be hate and condemnation. But, at least some people who like this novel will try and help the author. I wish him luck. I didn’t read a lot so this could be counted as a spam review since I didn’t say anything meaningful.
