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You did a great job with this story I love how you portrayed the main character and I think you did a great job balancing the system this story has a great plot so far and I just really can't wait to see what you do next keep up the great work!
A good read , wish content was released a little more often because i dont feel i truly can get sucked in with so little chapters. then again i read 50 chapters a day for fun lol
So, does anyone have a summary they could share? I'd appreciate it and so would everyone else; so, if you do, please write a review or comment under mine. -Sincerely, Mojus
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I really like the writing . It makes me not want to stop reading and it just keeps pulling me in . This is really amazing !
This is an absolute surprise. The story already reached 3.7K views! I am definitely overwhelmed with all your support. Keep it up! Thank you!
This is my review of the first fifty chapters:1.The novel begins with auxiliary chapters and I recommend reading it before starting to read the novel.2.The construction of the novel is more than wonderful, with simple errors from the author that you will not notice much ... The main character starts pathetic and I can say that if he does not have the plot armour, he will not live more than 20 chapters.3.It is easy to notice the naivety of the main character in all the events of the first fifty chapters of the novel from following the evil maid who destroyed his village or following her orders even if he had a chance to escape ... not accepting the fact that his father abandoned him to save his life and the life of his mother, or that his maid is just a spy To a hostile kingdom ... or when he decided to submit to the family of the assassins who originally caused all his suffering and the fact that he apologized for causing the murder of the female assassin who kidnapped him almost made me decide to leave the novel.4.Even now I can ignore all the mistakes that he did because of his ignorance or his weakness ... But when he was forced to become an assassin from the same hostile kingdom that destroyed his village and is the main cause of all his suffering and all he did is train and train and train only because he was ordered to do, This became extremely absurd.5.Here what bothers me is the way he treats the people who trained him ... First they are enemies so he is not supposed to befriend them, But if we ignore this point, we can talk about his treatment of his trainer (the only person who cared about him), Although she did not want to treat him harshly or train him intensely because she could not bear to see a child suffering like this, he was treating her coldly and without an appreciation for her concern, Even when he decided to try to stop her from risking her life to save him from execution, all that came in his mind was insulting her and hurting her feelings so that she would stop caring for him.6.One of the things that surprised me was the fact that he never used his mind even once during the first fifty chapters.7.Just so as not to misunderstand me ... the author wrote a wonderful novel and the main character's flaws are intended to illustrate his future growth and the difference between his way of thinking before and after the turning point.8. The main character's turning point or what I hope would be his turning point is Chapter 50 in which he realizes how narrow-minded an idiot he was in making his decisions, I know very well that there is more than one point that should be much better to count as his turning point in the first fifty chapters, but this is what happened so bear with his naivety until then.9.Mr.author made a good novel so everyone who reads this review just has a try. Read it and you will love what you find.10.My advice to the author: Try to change the name of the novel because the current name is not attractive at all.Again thanks for your hard work Mr.author, you did a great job.
Kok sudah gak pernah update lagi gan,....Padahal seru loh ceritanya,....Ditunggu update terbarunya,....Jangan setengah-setengah updatenya dong,....
