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Good story so far, with a mixture of comedy and action.Hope u keep up the good work and not drop it in middle.Best of luck!?????????
good luck
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Nice plot. Read something different after a while. The story is developing in a goob way. The characters are described well but the surrounding should be addressed a bit more. This is a good novel overall. So would love to read more.
It's feels so rushed and doesnt even try to give explanations or context. Also there was a trial read 2 months ago with this exact same set up but with a better title and actually good writing.
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The side characters are probably the worst part of this novel and the clichés you see everywhere make it worse. I mean you can use clichés but make it good. MC is alright, nothing interesting. The premise of the story is actually very interesting but it is executed in a boring way.