mc a simp and that alone makes me hate the novel and if you wondering why I gave it 5 star is because author deletes reviews that show the bad side of his work
excellent story. plzzzzzzzz....... update more chapters✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️. we are waiting ????????????????????????????????
I have been waiting so long for a translation for this novel. Unfortunately, great story ruined by poor translation. Please put some effort in your translation team, webnovel.
Mandatory 5-star self-review. I'm confident in the quality of my writing and guarantee you its consistency throughout the book.If you like grim worlds with a dark fantasy feel, unfathomable Lovecraftian horrors, and the threat of madness at every corner, this is the story for you. As I have noted, the beginning will be slow but not uninteresting. The protagonist is highly intelligent, manipulative, and cunning but not overly ruthless nor a murder hobo. His first taste of power will come relatively late, but it will be sweet, and worth it after all the hurdles he will have faced.If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask. Also, don't forget to vote and leave a review. It greatly motivates me to continue writing!
While it doesn’t bring much new to the equation of saving the villainess otome isekai otome game more than makes up for it in some of the best excecution I’ve seen in some time. Characters: The protagonist and love interest are likeable and have great chemistry, the antagonist is deliciously hatable but not too the degree where it effects the readers suspension of disbelief, (as a side people like that exist I have met them), side characters aren’t neglected at all and have enough spotlight placed on them that they are memorable but not so much that they steal the spotlight from the main cast.Pacing: it retains a good forward momentum so that you feel like something worth reading has happened but doesn’t feel rushed. Plot points don’t feel needlessly dragged out and every word feels as if it serves a purpose rather than being there to increase word count.Settings: the setting is a typical magic school otome setting nothing really of note here but the story is character driven so that doesn’t retract from the quality overall.Release rate: a good stable one chapter per week with consistent quality, minimal typos, and moderate length.Writing Quality: Great, it’s clearly been properly proofread, the author clearly cares about this story and i haven’t run into any instances where I had to read a section more than once to figure out what’s going on. PS: to the author, originality is overrated, execution is far more important so don’t take my comment on “not bringing anything new to the equation” as a negative point.
When someone with the strength to crush your skull with their bare hands and is a walking one man army that gets reincarnated what could go wrong I love this story and am aways up to date, I came here from Reddit.
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Overused trope with a shallow plot and laughable character development. Magic system is a joke. Passable read to waste time......................................
Great Idea but too many ascenin things the priotities of the mc are all over thje place and he is supposed to a survivalist. so much potential but not maximized not a bad read tho
Well, it's a cultivation novel, so I recommend you keep your standards low. If you do, you'll be pleasantly surprised.However, keep your standards up to things like Solo Leveling or The Death Mage Who Doesn't Want a Fourth Time and you might be displeased.Since it's a cultivation novel, pacing is inconsistent, but that's nothing new. Characters are pretty typical, but not to the point of being full on "I'm just here to power level the MC!" stereotypes.Chapters are released often if you read the first 86 and find you want to continue reading. I stopped here as the novel is just not my cup of tea, being a godforsaken cultivation novel, but others might like it.That's it I suppose. Really, I just feel meh about this novel. There was a good, entertaining idea going with the characters, but it fell short. It feels like it's more about the strength and fighting and making money and cultivation than it is about the main characters themselves, but I could just be focusing on those parts more.
This book brings out the raw emotions of a man struggling to overcome his past, I loved it right from the get-go and couldn't stop reading. The author did an amazing job with the story, well done?????
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