Hello everyone I am the writer of this book. This is my first time writing a novel so I will be very glad if you tell about the things which I need to improve as I want to become to writer in future.HOPE THAT YOU LIKED IT
I had enough patience until chapter 20. It's bad. You can call it "chaos" in one word. The narrative jumps, often ending in nothing. Dumb dialogues between the main character and the system, I don't even know which one is dumber. In general, chaos, chaos, chaos.
I am just here for the free pass from an event. I have not read it
Don’t judge a book by it’s cover......I’m not new to WebNovel though i lost my main account.... I’ve read books.... to cut the long story short, i never expected to be drawn to this book.. you know, planning to read just the first chapter but later reading every chapter available and waiting for more... lolReally sensing a love triangle...Can’t say more????Waiting for updates ??
goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood start goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
really good writing and excellent descriptions
my life, but I do remember the car accident that i met in 2045 May, I was in coma
"Bye desu."
And tada ... What i saw is an bigger toy, bigger than the toy that Doctor ever playing with me, bigger than the electric chair.
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"And that's the most amazing thing about life."
Before he can reach him the man uses the grey control panel hanging from his shoulder to release a red laser beam at Superboy. Strong enough to knock him back and to the parking surface on his back. Unmoving.