Bro I love his OP starting.But still please give him worthy opponents.If he can see through and destroy everything there won't be much fun..... Add some: (just suggestions)✓ mysteriosus girls/goddess charecters✓ Another hidden identity (clone?) with low power.(else can't see others true face)✓ great lovely harem. yandre is good but can't cross line.✓ plot twists✓ Yet adventure another multiverse. Great job anyway.keep up.
I really like the story and it's plot development. Kudos to you
hey the author her......am a aspiring writer am always in need of feedback and type of review is greatly appreciated am not ashamed to say am a complete beginner, so any feedback i get is helpful be it praise or a criticism about something.... as that also can help me improve going forward
Very good, one of the best and most unique novels I have ever read, I have read novels with similar plots, but this one is certainly among the best, of course, it has some flaws in the plot, but in itself it is fun to read, thank you very much for the novel.
hi this is DE ?. I'm a new author that just start writing last month, I wrote this novel to learn and try to seek as much experience as possible. I would be grateful if you read and liked this novel by high schoolers (I'm 17 ?). Relax, this novel doesn't tell trash shounen like anime or other wet dream novels. thank you ?
Really good writing, next level of synopsis and the chapter - 1 is really fire, and the transmigration into the novel, is really unique, especially the killer scene, keep it up, I am gonna follow the story right on the bank
A beautiful story of how fate connects two lost souls. I love the beginning and can't wait for the rest ? Knowing the characters from One Wild Night book I'm amazed at how much they changed and curious about what caused it both for the protagonists and antagonists. How can one live with so much malice? Once brave and daring, now shy and quiet. Will she gain the courage to step up? ... I guess we'll see... [rubs hands with a chuckle] ☺️
I'm really enjoying the blend of human and dragon elements in this story. The dragon powers are a highlight, and I appreciate how the author is balancing the protagonist's human and dragon sides. The world-building is also well-done, making it easy to become immersed in the story. Keep up the good work! Looking forward to seeing where the story goes from here."
i haven't read much so don't know about story and world system will probably update the review after reading it more or maybe not
This novel is a league of its own! The system with realistic business adventures is super entertaining to read. MC and side chars are wonderful and interesting, well written, I'd say.What can ai say except "I highly recommend this!"
This novel is a league of its own! The system with realistic business adventures is super entertaining to read. MC and side chars are wonderful and interesting, well written, I'd say.What can ai say except "I highly recommend this!"
This is a gem!!!! i stumbled upon it a month ago and I must say it's a fantastic read that leaves you thirsting for more. Good job author-sama ??