LamenThief
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l have only read the first chapter but it's promising
I logged in just to say this.. be grateful puny mortal author! this was a very enjoyable read the characters are the strong suit. the world Is addictive and the plot Is fire. well done puny mortal.
lovely captivating and entertaining you would love it
I don't mind if this story doesn't hit it off. I'll write better ones in the future. However, I think it is worth reading for what I'm offering. I won't get a contract for this story, nor will I accept one in that case. It will be for anyone to read if they like how I write, or the kinds of stories I write. This is only the beginning. The Lord of Rot is a fantasy story set in a post apocalyptic future, where the main character has to survive whilst navigating through a complex world of monsters infected by a "rot" and a system of belief beneath the deities of this world. The story will continue to get more in depth, but it is an easy start. The writing is good - but maybe different to many other web novels. I don't thin the main character is a bad one, but he is our lens to the world, not anything else - - - as of yet. Please do read... (:
Though, I already stopped reading, but I felt like I should put a review in case author decides to go through his reviews and see what he might need to work on when writing another book.First of, I say 5 star for update becaue I dont know about the update stability and there is already over 800 chapters.Every other aspects lacks so badly, the ghost design was written really properly.I mean he is a ghost but cannot see in the dark with or without a physic body. Him getting ambushed in dark by monsters/spirit like being or what that was in the first 40 chapters is weird.Cant remember all the reason why I stopped reading this as it has been a while but the writing skill about a ghost as a main charater needs massive improvement.What I do think is that author is wrote the character using the traits of a human instead of a ghost. Anyway, goodluck to you improving, I'm not criticizing here but I'm stating what I feel it lacked. I dont know of chapters past the 50s, so there might have been improvement.Thank you .
I think I found my favorite author and book. From the first 20 chapters, I realized that the author and I have the same way of thinking.Smart MCOP MCRuthless MC against enemiesHandsome MCBut it would be better if it had a love story because being handsome is useless without a woman.
understandable completely.
"Fritz, my name is not--"
This is to let you guys know that your comments and reviews are appreciated and considered.As for if the fan-fic is a harem or not , Guys please why do we want a fan-fic , isn't it because we can't get enough of the original and to add our desired path to the original path of the novel. You tell me what is your desired path , does it not contain harem.
Hey guys! Your lovely neighborhood editor here :P. Zhanye got drunk last night, so today's chapter is going to be late. If there is one at all. So if your reading this thank you for patience and understanding. ^_^
FNAF: The Shattered Corridors (Breaking The Mold) Live Production (Nights 1 & Half Of Night 2)
