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plot is very interesting... a little slow paced for me I guess... but it's OK as long as it is interesting... all the best and hope for more release... thank you ?
I am not really into sci-fi fiction, so this novel felt quite new to me. I believe the starting could've been better, especially that information dumping part. The way of describing the situation can be improved even more to ease the flow in reading. Otherwise, the storyline is very interesting. Best of luck author!
THIS IS AMAZING ???? . what a growth of characters ??. it was an page turning novel ( what a plot ❤❤❤) . loved it. more updates.. will there be a love traingle btw lucifer, alex and davina?? ? who will be the second mate ?? ... i am so excited. we need upstree. ??? ..
i strongly recommend it.
First of all, you need to know this story is written in play style writing, with asterisks instead of double quotes. Other than that, every thing is neatly summarized in chapter 1. The story is interesting and I can see load of potential. However, the update is really lacking as it's taking forever for a chapter to be updated.Try it. It just might be your cup of tea.
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