Really good novel waiting for more chapters ?
Keep up the work author ?I hope you don’t abandon your writing:)Good luck and have a nice day?
It's a slow burn, Michael takes his time to figure out his skill and get stronger. But that's what I'm here for! I like slowburn stories, it gets satisfying when the MC improves. I don't this this is cliche, certainly this has a lot of potential in world building. I'm giving 4 since this still have a room to improve.
Very interesting story and world building
Disclaimer: I am writing this review considering that this is the author's first novel. Like some other fans, I was also paid by the author to write a good review(just kidding?)...1. Writing quality:- So, considering this is the author's first novel, the writing quality is good. After catching on to the recent chapters I can conclude that the author is not good at describing the characters, but he is showing major improvements from the 1st chapter.2. Story Development:- The way the author executed his ideas was amazing since this whole 'Getting Isekaid in a novel/game I read/played' is a recent uprising cliche, the author did a great job of adding extra elements to make this interesting. This was also the first time I read a 13-chapter prologue.3. Character Design:- Unlike others, this author is focused more on chapter design than world-building which is welcomed change. The fact that the author put effort into writing a 13-chapter prologue gives depth to the mc. He did a great job in making the mc relatable and many others(including me) found the mc quite similar to us despite his messed-up past. He feels more real, his love for his family, and his struggles all feel real. Update Stability:- The author is very much consistent, you can expect 1 or 2 chapters per day.World background:- There is not much to say as the prologue was focused completely on the main character, and he just recently got transported to the novel world. In a second review(if this book crossed 150 chapters), I will write a detailed review of the world background.My personal opinion:- This book and its author both have tons of potential to be tapped into. If you are like me who loves watching an author improve as each chapter passes by then you will love this.A quote I like very much from this book:-"If you can't find someone you can trust, then look for someone you can control."As per our agreement, you gibe me moneh I gibe you a 5-star review. So you better appreciate me author??. (First time I wrote a review of 2k words)
I'll be supporting you here too! To be honest the story getting better and better from volume 2. Keep up the good work??
It looks promising, pacing can be increase more but I personally like slow story building, keeps us link to characters more. I am looking forward to reading more about Ravian story, I am more interested in him than the MC ?
this novel is better than previous version
have to say I'm impressed , at what my mind can create?
i don't know how he get the cat, why people say his cat is useless. How the ranking system work, what happen when he awaken. I mean at least give me more information in the beginning especially the earlier how the MC meet the cat
have 4 phases of life, just like
Jahn barged through the hordes of people, pressing his hand to his head, as if to try and keep his brain from falling out. He struggled down a shady alleyway, fighting against the stress that filled him. He thudded against a wall, bringing up the contents of his stomach. Every step he took, the stones below him seemed to extend tentacles to ensnare his soul. He struggled on. Took a left turn, stumbled into a small courtyard. He looked around him. Suddenly, his surroundings fell into place. This was it! He stared at his reflection inna puddle, battered, bruised, yet a miracle all the same. He truly was worthy of greatness. Somehow, his subconscious had brought him here, to the hideout prepared for him by his mysterious contractor. Someone up there must have plans for him. This must be the proof he was destined for greatness. But… he had let panic overtake him, when it mattered most. He had fallen victim to his own mind. If he wanted to be great, he would have to overcome this. He unlocked the pitted iron door to the hideout with a slim silver key. Dust sneezed out of the gloom. He staggered up stone steps, flopped down in a wicker chair in the attic, and fell asleep, without even checking his surroundings.