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It's surprisingly not that bad. I just wanted to try something simulation type and at first, I thought MC was quite generic. You know, simp, low IQ, stubborn, lecherous, but I realised that I was too prejudiced. He reacted quite normally. I was just projecting my grievances with other novels on this MC. Like, he went back in time, but didn't know what to do with his money, so he chose to leave it in the bank for interest. Granted, it may not be the best use of money but it's definitely the safest. Also, he didn't let it get to his head and thought of setting limits on how to spend it so that he doesn't get carried away in the future. He is just a typical levelheaded ordinary guy. Also, he is pretty single minded and he was not extremely lecherous. He was quite pure. He didn't even kiss anyone properly in his two lives. I think some of the choices he makes due to impulsiveness gave me the wrong impression. Anyway, in these few chapters I have changed my opinion 180 degrees. ?
So far this book is a good read but please check your chapter placement you went form a boss fight to repet chapters. This make the store fall flat on it head.
I didnt read much, there where too many things not adding up in the story. wierd how it has soo many 4+ star raitings. From what is written seems to be his stats start out at those of healthy adult yet he takes 3 hours to run 5 miles, average walking speed is 3mph and that is taking into account unhealthy people. Stats are wrong every other chapter. Then when he is barley stronger than the average he procceds to beat up 3 people who have atleast some figthing experience since they are bullies, while im assuming he has 0 since author wrote he either runs away or escapes from then
This is a breath of fresh air. Different idea, relatable characters (to me) that are not one dimensional. I recommend this book if you want something different from the usual garbage on webnovel. Oh and of you are rich. The chapters airer expensive af
was the author kidnapped or something?don't want to waste a whole 3k coins for 50 chapters in privilege. hope to see updates soon or else..
Come on start this already I’am reall hooked by the synopsis and the tile so pretty pls start translating this already. Can’t wait anymore to see this in the next novels to be translated. ???????????????????????????????????
Notice To New Readers! My first few chapters' writing quality is quite bad and can be said to lack creativity, as I was still a newbie at the time, but gets much better as the novel progresses!I can't say my writing quality is the best now, but compared to when I started, it's much better. I know my story isn't the best on the site but there are at least some things to like about it! Hope you stick around!Also, there will be No Harem on this book. The MC will have a single partner and no more than that. Thanks for reading this review, and I hope you stick around with the book to the end.
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