I think it’s a great book that need little to no major corrections but maybe introducing a new side-character that has some unique connection to Master Magi. One minor thing that I think you could add is his Dragon Horned Rhino evolves into a ‘purer’ form of a dragon and gains some special ability only for earth dragons. The last thing you should keep doing is adding the snotty rich kid type that get always seems to get whooped in the end. Its been great reading this book and I hope you add a second part.
Why do the smart-level human should cure the autistic human diseases, they won't be listen to him, so when you talk to pigs they not gonna listen to you unless you give him a food."
Their world.
And tada ... What i saw is an bigger toy, bigger than the toy that Doctor ever playing with me, bigger than the electric chair.
4. Human half genius (Extremly
5. Human genius (Immortal)
They keep walking through the corridors into their living room.
(A/N)
You're bundled up now, wait till you get older
Didn't make sense not to live for fun
I need to get myself away from this place
Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid