This is my first time the shop owner almost kill inside his shop, funny right, all i mean novel with a system and selling something inside his shop his almost invisible inside, hahha even though is almost copy with the selling pokemon around the world,, my point here is the host/mc is too weak and the system is weak though, can't even protect mc,
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I have read up to chapter 8 and I believe it's enough for me to review the novel.Writing Quality: Excellent. The author doesn't use too complicated words but uses words to create sentences that describe the scenes in detail yet not structuring it in a complex way. Easy to read and sentences doesn't break off immersion.Story Development: The Protagonist is a goblin with a VR helmet. So far the pacing is moderately done and the MC started off as a weak goblin which leads to more progress in the later chapters. I can assume that the story will last long for the MC didn't become overpowered at the start.Character Design: The author didn't write the characters as one dimensional cardboards who only speak what is written on the script. You can feel the emotions of the characters such as their frustration and fear depending on what scene was being portrayed. The dynamic between Lucas and Rei is quite intriguing to read.Updating Stability: The author is a monster when it comes to writing words per day. He can write 20k words if he doesn't have any busy works in his schedule. So not only can author maintain stable updates, he even has countless chapter stockpiles that might be released if he holds a mass release event. In other words, updates aren't a problem since author can update daily.World Background: It is set in a fantasy world filled with magical creatures and different races and species. The fantasy element introduced in the world will not let you get bored if you like reading novels with fantasy genre. But since I have only read the early chapters, the author didn't info dump about the world background so I'm slightly clueless of the in-depth world background of this novel. Nevertheless, the world background shouldn't be boring since the author already have written several novels before to know what to write and what not to write.Overall: I can only say as expected of the author. He never fails to write an entertaining novel depending on the reader's taste in novel genre. So for those who aren't certain whether to read this or not, at least read 5-10 chapters. You won't regret it.
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This novel is really uninteresting, so much so that I actually had to take a break and listen to the new Drake album. To nobody's surprise, the Drake album was about as interesting as this so I came back to try read this again and then proceeded to die of boredom.This doesn't deserve a detailed review, there's a saying that the opposite of love is not hate but indifference and that more or less encapsulates how I feel about this. Dropped at CH 10 (idk). yawn(0)/5.
The story is is great for now, with very stable updating that I really appreciate by the author. The story is perfectly readable with no grammatical errors and show great potential.
the beginning is pretty bad, you have no idea what is happening, the mind picture is unclear, overall bad beginning nejdkdkkdkdkdkkddkk
Very interesting story, good character development and great story flow. The only thing I can suggest was to keep the consistency of your story. If you can make more character development, try it because your characters in the story is one of the most important part in the plot that you wanted to have... thats all
Fluff Overload!! Cuteness is Everywhere and the World is Full of Sugar!!Only Drawback is MC's Old Man Syndrome!! Makes you want to Shout!! : )Loving the Interactions!! You just know.. MC getting a Jobs gonna turn Bad..
Although too early to review. It's from the same author as demon lord's reincarnation and that too a prequel so I am excited about it. Although it might look cliche but things are more difficult than MC's previous world and the first real fight did take him everything to fight. Hope author continues the momentum...
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The story is very well thought out and stable the character design is is one of the best i have seen..... the world background is great and i really like the small details you throw in there at times, i would have gave it a complete 5 stars if there wasnt a few misspellings but those aren't really a big deal (seeing how i probably misspelled a few thing while writing this) to me, other than that its agreat story!