I had to stop reading this at Chapter 233. I advise readers to read with precaution as it could have a negative impact to one's mind. All due to the MC and (I don't know about this) the Author's philosophy about life.The MC is mentally disarranged to the point where he has no sympathy after his mother's death. You can consider him no different from a beast in this world. Made me realize that the other characters are more human compared to the MC.But, the story and the ideas are interesting. I just had to drop it because I felt that it isn't worth my read anymore.I usually don't mind cold MCs.. but this one is like a robot. I don't consider Noah human anymore.
The story is progressing smoothly with character development. Also you should add more tags that correlate to the story like kingdom buildings, city building, etc.
I really enjoy this novel... From the world building to the character growth I can see why his novel will go boom when it's finally released.
Liked this one better. Earlier novel was more of a monologue or talking to bots. this time, it feels better laid out. waiting for more.Good work
Hey the author here! If anyone wants to give me any idea's or feedback feel free! I want to get better as i write this journey and i can't do that without knowing where I'm weak! Also hope you enjoy and stick with me! :D
chapter 5 hurts me a lot, kapanakit mo but keep it up, i'm waiting for the romance chapter, keep it up, we are waiting for the next chapter!
what a beautiful book! it has a message, a good one, one that keeps you looped in. yoou write with a melody and i keep trrying to hear all the notes. well done!
Adopted Soldier is one of my favorite books on this site, and the other book of the author demon lord's reincarnation is also pretty amazing.This story is also as good.Though the first few chapters might not seem as impressive (probably because the author said he had written those in high school), the story really picks up soon.It is amazing and the characters are really lovely.Keep it up author.