Such an as-(Stares at barrel of thy pew pew) Ahem- Very very good writing, I enjoy it so far, keep up the very high quality work my introverted friend
Amazing ,your capturing and portraying a nice view am so reading this
The start was very mysterious, I kept wondering where we were I do hope we get to find out the meaning of the trance. I enjoy the world building, its off to a slow space but it's very immersive.free my boy Aiden please ☹️
Waste of time. Starts off quite decently, but it soon devolves into the mess that most CNs are. A parade of arrogant young masters trying to rape doe eyed young maidens, and the only one who stands in their way is the MC. Despite the fact that the maidens have greater backing than the young masters, let alone the MC.Also, the MC has way too many cheats. His "Mysterious Family Background" that gives him an OP bloodline AND an OP mecha. He coincidentally becomes the master of an AI(from another universe) that can hack into any network, AND gains a "Mysterious Master" (Also from another universe)
First of all, I'm going to admit that I didn't really think this would be a good book when I decided to read it. Why?It was a yuri book. This review was meant to be a hate review that was supposed to spite the author as I poured out all the errors.However it changed after I read it.Writing Quality: 4 starsThe author knows how to write, I'll say that. The conversation between the protagonist and the villainess doesn't feel forced. Even the OG main character doesn't feel weird, as the OG mc is a pervert and to be honest, I wish I could be in her shoes.Stability of Updates: A constant update schedule, nothing more nothing else, and it isn't dropped.Story Development: I don't really have any complaints for the plot, in fact I actually like where the plot is going.Character Design: Quite a few characters have been introduced and I find each of them interesting. Each has their different personalities and isn't some arrogant rich brat noble or a typical cold character because they're from nobles (Personally the cold character is justified because I'm used to reading about clans, where they're supposed to act cold and never show any signs to the public).World Background: ............It's definitely a world, but what's the background?The world hasn't been explored enough yet, that's all I can say.Overall I recommend this book to both yuri readers and non-yuri readers alike.Also I have yet to see any of the so-called "fan-service
The story is more interesting and I wonder what could be the end
nice boo... keep going ??????????????????
nice good story. nice start. need more. keep writing
Not a new idea, but strong characters right off the bat, with a defined story line.
Rey Castle is really an egoist, The fact that the shadow authority is this vast, I want to see how strong he will become
Keven, a simple farmer’s son, has one dream: to become a sword wielder, a position of immense power, wealth, and fame that could lift his family and village out of poverty. In this captivating fantasy, Keven’s journey begins when he’s chosen to pursue his dream, and as the story unfolds, we are introduced to a host of colorful characters, thrilling challenges, and dark secrets.The author does a fantastic job bringing Keven’s world to life with rich descriptions and a plot that keeps you hooked from the start. The characters are well-developed, and the relationships Keven forms, both friendships and rivalries, add depth to the narrative. There’s a perfect balance of magic, danger, and mystery that keeps the story exciting.The grammar and writing style are excellent, making the story easy to follow without losing its complexity. It’s clear the author has put a lot of care into crafting this tale, and with the story still ongoing, I can’t wait to see where Keven’s journey takes him next.Highly recommended for fans of epic fantasy and coming-of-age stories!
I have only problem with one thing and that is your strong hold or your foundation is not strong on your story everything else is really good I mean really good it's just you are taking your story in fast way that's also good thing but you are not developing your main characters feeling not telling us how he feels because if you want to make your correct likeable by everybody you have to show some kind of emotions like anger soup your tea complex and defeating his own emotion by some kind of incident everything, this way he can understand and we can understand that he is developing in the story even though he has power he should understand or you should make us feel that is this character is real in our imagination and the story by showing us or letting us feel his emotion bye elaborating every small details if you can in his life that way you will make your story better even better than this is right now