most novel stopped enjoyable if you apply real world logic
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Sorry we're goin' out. Damage 100
So what's the story here... It's a done deal no more updates
The story is cool and I can say that it was passable. Grammar is fine and also its narration. The flow too! Good job and keep it up! [img=angry]
I've been looking for this kind of novel, but it's not often that I've met this card game novel. At first, I secretly disliked Tantai a little bit because some rich people usually have their personal habits which is quite not nice. So.. yes, he's just like that. But then when I read and got to know more about him, I turned to like this character lol
This novel is hilarious. It makes me wait eagerly for the next chapter. I'm curious about what the author will reveal each time. Amazing job.
This story comes from the depth of my imagination. A tale I wanted to write for years but never got to. So please, help me along the way and support me with your heart!
As a fellow author it pains me to see that you have so many grammatical errors in your synopsis. Please get yourself a software to fix those mistakes
The novel is pretty good so far, amazing! It has a lot of action and suspense that makes the readers feel excited and nervous, even me. You describe the scenes vividly and creates a lot of tension and drama. The fights are well-written and show the different abilities and strategies of the characters.However:The novel has some grammatical and spelling errors that can distract the readers and affect the flow of the story. You should proofread and edit the chapters before publishing them or use a tool like Grammarly to check for mistakes if you want to...The novel has some inconsistencies and plot holes that can confuse the readers and create logical errors. For example, in chapter 2, Kage says he doesn’t know what level three is, but in chapter 3, he says he knows it’s a rumor. In chapter 4, Kage says he doesn’t know how to use his OGI, but in chapter 5, he uses it without any explanation. In chapter 6, Kage says he doesn’t know who Unknown is, but in chapter 7, he calls him his best friend. You should keep track of the details and events of the story and make sure they are consistent and coherent. (I'm not a pro or anything, just some advice.)But Overall, still good! The novel is an enjoyable and entertaining read that has a lot of strengths and possibilities. You have a creative imagination and a good sense of humor. The novel can appeal to fans of sci-fi and fantasy genres who like action-packed.
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This is a seriously great novel. Gotta love the main lead and even the way all the other characters relate to him. If you have ever watched rick and morty, this is seriously similar. The rick is complete eith portals and a dubious moral compass as he manipulates his morty. The morty is completely pulled along for the ride. They have their little spats where the morty tries to separate himself and do some good in the world. But in the end he is pulled along for all the escapades, he even occasionally lets loose old women who then proceed to destroy stuff.10/10 novel. Only improvement could be 30 chaps/day.