"Hi, I'm new here! I'm completely hooked on?'The Cursed Prince Strange Bride' and I'm excited to dive into this new story. It's already got me on edge - can't wait to see what happens next!"
I love this novel. Give it a read it’s a little different from the usual romance tropes on here and it’s refreshing
Details are okay and intriguing. Typos are there and it’s inevitable
Yo yo yo wtf yo yo yo . I demand some complex romance drama(harem) . That much should be expected of the author . Also I want the MC do some slaughters here and there . We can have some wars as well .The more blood and murder the better . If it is possible make the MC a little like Fang yuan from Reverend insanity . Someone who uses anyone to achieve what he wants.If it is possible that is . Other than that best of luck .
Hi, shameless author here.Please drop your reviews and comment on your favorite chapters.Thank you for reading my book.
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Hi Goku h..My bad wrong lines shameless author review here just going drop the first review.
You know, what made I'm in Hollywood great is the inclusion of real life people. We get to see the mc interact with them, change their whole fate and rise above the big names.This has 0 punch in it because all names are foreign to us, they have almost no impact and we can't even know how they look and compare their personalities because they're just names here, nothing but empty names. We can't even visualize them because the descriptions are bare minimum.What im trying to say is you're good at telling stories and the prolonged paragraphs of workings of things but you're bad at making people visualize it.
Editing makes it super hard to understand and then u lose interest to read
Though not a fan of the genre, the synopsis won me over.
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keep up the good and fantastic work, TSA