Dear author. Good start, seems interesting enough. I've followed the HOTD story (and not just the anime) an was always disappointed that it never continued or reached a conclusion. So I am glad people like you are willing to broaden the HOTD storyline and world. No chapters since Feb. 2019 is a bummer, and though your 'point format' of telling the story reflects the state of mind of the mc at the time, I do hope you will expand on the situations/conversations/events as they occur, like a real novel. Looking forward to more writing from you, and I promise I will only offer CONSTRUCTIVE criticism
Affinity: Metal, Fire
Karl chuckled and held her hands caringly.
Flint: Ash
*More convincing*
I thought I was strong, that no amount of problem could hurt me but I'm wrong. Here I 'am crying out my broken heart; trying to ease the pain I have inside.
"Squeal!" The creature uttered a shrill cry as it was flung backwards due to the resulting explosion.
Artorius stared hard at him for a moment, then motioned towards the bodies. "They were attempting to break in to this cell. They are armed and equipped; I believe their goal was to kill this girl."
Works Cited
"Hmm.. the one you wore last acquaintance ball? That suits." As Eiji was to return back to his seat, Jhun suddenly spoke.
Extending her right hand to her vagina, Kurihara-san touched it with her finger.
-saint 9 levels