Blitzo
this is becoming more interesting the more I read
Hey again! I'm still looking forward to hearing your opinions about the book as it will help me improve on the subsequent chapters ?Thank you!
Okay, okay, nice book. The beginning totally got me hooked I vowed to do a review. I love the mc, seems relatable and the vocabulary is impressive. A solid 5 star.
i was so confused at first 24 chapters but its quite enjoyable after that
First few chapters are very nice keep it going
Very captivating plot, i only read a few chapters and i'm already hooked. You'll be making a huge mistake if you don't check out this masterpiece.
The story itself is quite solid across the board. Decent prose and writing ability from the author, and generally just a solid read all around.
Welcome back author! I'm looking forward to trying this out. Will there be Yuri or ntr? Also, is ero meter coming back?
I like the book and the writing. My only complaint was personal preference. The MC honestly is a tad wimpy. It seems like he is literally crying every 2 or 3 chapters. Again this is preference and maybe him being overly emotional is by design. I’m just more adjusted to a tougher MC in these type of stories.
I love the story so far. I don't read much on this platform but this work is one whose updates I look forward to daily. Continue to update regularly and develop the story as you are doing and it will be a great work!
The story so far has been solid. It a coming to age adventure tale with a non-iseki protagonist. The protagonists ability is interesting and fun to see. Overal has a lot pf potential!
"The One I Cherish" is a beautifully written tale of love and resilience. The author captures raw emotions and weaves them into a story that keeps you hooked until the very last page. A must-read for romance lovers!
