GojoVir
Loved this story bit I think it was abandoned unfortunately :(
This is one of my Favorite Cultivation Book with Dual Cultivation theme. Story was a bit generic, getting Heaven Defying Treasure, Ancient Inheritance and so on and so forth. But regarding Story development it's one of my Favorite, his Treasure was not that kind of Treasure that automatically makes him Super OP. He needs effort and years of training for it, while his Progress was Certainly out of the World this novel potray that even he needs Hundred of years to raised his Cultivation in later stage. Not like other Novel where the MC Literally still a Teenager but his Cultivation was surpass those Genius that cultivate for hundred of years. Now the hateful part...... Yep this novel originally was from Liberspark translation. Last Translated was in 31 of August, I was wondering why they didn't update after almost two weeks? Now the Answer is here...... Again Qidian Stole popular novel from Another site...... I mean I know even those site didn't have legal right to Translated the novel. But rather than Killing other people's Business, why don't you just repaired your own Business Huh? Qidian? How many Novel in My Library have been Dropped by you? F*cking bullsh*t. This bullsh*ttery started when they changed Spirit Stone to Coins.... Doesn't you know that Snatching other people's way of Living was the same as killing their parents? I hope Karma bite hard on you Qidian B*tch.
Really well-written story about going on adventures in a strange world. The way the story is paced and detailed is really well handled and the character motivations are clear and compelling.Just need to see how future developments will be performed.Kinda wish we would have a few more charcters. Chapters 01 to 07 were mostly mc-focused, but it seems this is about to change soon.Looking forward to see where its going.
Good story with little grammar errors. The world building is detailed and the story flows at a nice pace. I binged it and read it in a day but looking at the table of content tab, you can see it has 42 chapters in less then 2 months.
I just kept comparing it to the legendary mechanic while reading this and so far from what I read (c40) it is considerably worse. Pros: Unique world setting wasteland steampunkishSomewhat interesting golden finger.ConsGets a cheerleading fatty that stands at the sidelines right at the beginning.The mcs class let's him learn the other classes skills but cost double expThe mcs golden finger is just ripped off from star craft.I feel like this is one of those fanfictions where the author just puts their character in the universe of a another novel.The game system is similar the world setting is similar (they both find a hidden world plot that was never done before) even the next update to the game is the same (introduction to space)This is just a meh fanfiction that isn't as good as the original
