Grayback
Stands on business. Mc is not one to be pushed around and it doesn’t matter who it is. Great story so far and can’t wait to keep reading more. Highly recommend ???
overall a nice manipulation erotic read, obviously we aren't for a super mystery kind of story ?
Author everything is chief kiss the story is unique the power system is good I can’t find a one thing wrong about this novel except cam you show us the appearance of the characters it’s getting hard to imagine the Mc and your cover is not really pleasing to the eye. Everything else is perfect I need more chapters ?
What the author did in 546 is not brave or refreshing. It is objectively bad writing. He just got bored of what he was writing, but he was too cowardly to give it a quick ending and start a new novel. The story was great until then, but I am giving this rating, so that hopefully I can at least save a few people from experiencing what I did.
Hey man I think you should take a break you are starting new books and discontinuing them shortly after and this going out of hand as you discarded 2 or 3 books in last 2 months. I really think you should take a break as I feel your interest is getting lost and it is not good for you nor for us readers. You even discontinued LORD OF TIME it was going so good as just bam you stopped posting then you started new book then stopped again and the cycle repeats. Do please take care of yourself Your well-wisher
this novel makes no sense ,the mg is supposed to be a reincarnated cultivated but that barely affects the story ,the so-called artifact only shows once and is quite lack-luster,but the world building is very impressive
-Time to school
"The answer is deaf people."
"What? Of course not, but do you want me to just pretend to be like you?"
"Pfft ... yeah it's a pretty funny joke right Doc."
Zip!
"Pfft ... yeah it's a pretty funny joke right Doc."
