Found this by accident. I'm really excited to read this after finishing another book I've just found!
all the female lead character does is blush at everything the main character saysi don't think there's any character development in this novel at allits mind numbing
So interesting story but I’m going to drop.First, the English and grammar are decent. There are issues here and there but they aren’t too distracting.Story development: this is where the quality drops. It’s an interesting concept but the logic behind actions do not line up 5 times out of 10. This means that of the 10 actions the mc makes, 5 of said actions are complete forced plot or made up reasoning. I’ll continue this with the character design cause they mix.Character design: ok until the characters show skills they have no right to be able to show. The mc is a supposed city kid with no survival skills. Then he is somehow able to tell different breeds of wolves apart from each other. Then he is able to skin and butcher animals. He literally goes from no survival skills to all the survival skills. This is further exacerbated due to him having no tools/knives to help with his actions. The author obviously doesn’t understand that skinning an animal can’t just be done with your hands. I need at least a sharp knife.World background: ok but ties into the other evaluation. The mc makes constant assumptions that have no actual logical backing to describe his situation. Then the author doesn’t describe some things until they are relevant to the story at hand. This leads to even more unreasonable assumptions and actions that have no tells to why the mc actually did it or what is actually happening.
Nice novel. Waiting for more chapters.
This story is a breath of fresh air in the apocalyptic genre. You’ve created a world that feels rich in detail and full of suspense, yet it never loses touch with the emotional core of the characters. Your writing has a way of making me feel like I’m right there with them.
I promised a review after ten chapters and we're here. Well, I have to say, I'm impressed. I'm loving this story, the world building, narration and Kieran ??? The dude is relatable in so many ways. Kudo, author
I found this book on Facebook and absolutely loved it. I wanted to read moreeeI even downloaded the app because of it. I can't wait to finish it
So much potential, and the spice is absolutely delicious! I love the intense heat between Antonio and Dahlia. I'm also really excited to see how their characters develop and uncover what led to the events of Chapter 1. Can't wait for more!
???This is the Hatric In super hit books by our dearest author Mynovel ?First hit : YOUNG BROTHER-IN-LAW IS NOW MY HUSBAND ?We have experience a love, bonding, sacrifice n many more emotions of family, friends n relatives and even felt bad for villain.Second hit : WITCH’S DAUGHTER AND THE DEVILS’S SON ??Here we are getting a experience of another love, hatred, sacrifice relations between humans (full of energetic n lovable), witch (a cute adorable one ?) and devil (handsome and hot ?).Above two stories are yet to finish as we are yet drown in the amazing story and here come the third hit like boom ?Third hit : THE DEVILS’S CURSED WITCH ❤️❤️❤️❤️From the first chapter onwards it’s like what’s next…so amazing, after 5 chapter reading at one go feel it I want more. Eager for more…Wish u a looooooot of luck n love dear Mynovel ?
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"Exactly, but remember the rules, we can't make humans who have the power of magic." Dark swinging his finger.
"You know."