Shounen derived pathetic mc, the plot is nonexistant, while the character was a little believable at first then he completely turns into some dumb self justifier, half the chapters become him cheering and hyping himself the other is him pouring his insecurities to be left alone, you might call it character development but he is an adult what is there to develop? he turned into a pathetic loner, now that he has something that could completely dominate the world he gains motivation to do something?, that observe analize act bullsh it during the fights were especially cringy, every heard of mike tyson? everyone has a plan till they are met with a punch in the face. I guess you didn't receive any.
I read all the available raws and can confidently tell you to go ahead and enjoy the novel. It's sooo good and will make you crave for more.
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Very excellent story telling... it drags ones thoughts to go on reading and the author present very well the climaxes of every CHAPTER and the story lines provided challenges to the reader to keep on reading and desires for more.....KUDOS to the Author for best writing skills and style...
23 chapters in and all I can say is this is the most typical chinese novel you'll ever find.First few chapters was good tho but then it went downhill.Some old man gives him fantasy book,book gives him test,he passes and the book heals his upper body and lower body stays cripple,wakes up and thinks dad took care of him but left him to die, Pretty rich woman being overly kind and naive,typical cliche of everyone looking down on him(the phone buying scene), cute lil girl calling him daddy and make mama angry,and of course cliche gang sht.Just don't read it if you don’t like slow placed and Over used storylines.
I really enjoyed his book. It is refreshing to have an MC that doesn't feel the need to save everyone, and I like how they have inner turmoil a lot. In autumn fall school I feel like a lot of the characters are going to be disposed of very quickly. You do focus on the main characters (I'd say Jaime, Lyra, max and brie) but characters such as Richard, Tory and the cat girl are going to be thrown away or a running gig. Like it seems that Richard could be just a pervet, no character development, although it is unlikely. Whilst girl I feel is very important, yet will still be a running gig. I could be completely wrong here, so sorry if I am.
If you are looking for a novel to read try Plague Doctor in the trial read. Its a genuinely good novel with no young master face slapping Bs. With good plot progression and actual character's with depth to them. And a lot of mystery.
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Shi.tposting is an art! and this is the prime example of it! I'm hooked, I'm hooked, I'm hooked! I don't want this novel ever to end! And I hope it wont!
Thanks for sharing some Christmas magic with us. I’ve struggled during the holidays so I can relate to the characters snd feelings.
My first Webnovel story. I'm excited about this. Picturesque is also published in Wattpad. I'll be updating this story regilarly. Read responsibly!