Writing Quality- 5/5.01Update Stability- 5/5Story Development- 5/5Character Design- 10/10World Building- 10/10 This Novel Is Such A Wonder From The Bonk
Plot - 100%World-building - 150%Writing - 200%Characters - 250%Overall it is an awesome story that has a blend of transmigration, fantasy, and dragon(of course, the story would be boring without a dragon). Do give this story a try to get a different touch of fantasy with system...
Where do I begin? I started this book when I saw it had 158 chapters. This literally became my favorite Omegaverse book of all time. The reason being is that there is so mich chravter development. Relationships are not perfect and people are not either. This shows the growth of the characters - both ups and downs. My favorite relationship is by far Lee and Dexter! I did not pay it that much attention initially. I went back and re- read their entire relationship specifically. The author does a fantastic job of putting hidden clues/ foreShadowing/ explanations WAY ahead of time. The only downside is the author ocassionally uses the wrong character name. You will know though who they are talking about and I think its fine personally since they don’t have a professioanly proof reader. If you are debating in reading this book - do it! You will be going on journey!
The character design and the frequent updates are a definitely good and the way he built the background for the world was good as well, the names are definitely better than what I've seen in most novels.
The concept of this novel is very unique compared to the other game novels.For now(ch 40) it looks quite interesting.I hope the author makes it more better in the future.
Heya everyone. This is my shameless review of this novel. The world of this novel is the same as that of A Demon's Journey. It's just situated in another kingdom. The main character of my previous novel will be shown, I just urge you to wait a bit.I am confident that you will love this story as well. Thank you.
Every word has a deep meaning. Very suspenseful sci-fi. I like this story. The author uses language that is quite easy for reader to understand. Fighting ?
This novel is interesting. The writing quality could improve but it doesn’t bother me too much. The story development hasn’t really gone anywhere as of yet but it’s only been six chapters. The character design is interesting, the world building isn’t different but that’s because it’s the real world. Overall this book has room for improvement and I’d suggest grammerly for little mistakes though it’s a very good read?
I’ll start my review of this novel by saying outright that Pancakes is my favorite author on webnovel, and I throughly enjoy their novels, so there may be some inherent bias in my review. And everything written below is personal opinion. I have currently read up to chapter 132, and really enjoy this novel as it differs from Pancakes other works like Epic of Caterpillar, DQR, and World Traveling. I really enjoy the balance of slice of life elements that are vital to the understanding of the MC Elayne and the other supporting characters like her daughter Elena, friend Rika and others. Mixed in with the action elements that occur through the VRMMO that is the key element of this story. The main reason that our MC started to play is quite admirable as she wishes to get closer to her daughter after passing of her husband 5 years ago. None of the characters so far feel one dimensional or flat and each adds a unique aspect to the world building and overall story. While some readers may question certain relations between characters I found overall that the characters are very well thought out. The world building in this novel has been developing at a steady pace throughout, both in elements of the “real world” and BNLO VRMMO world. Pancakes has an extremely firm grasp on mythological and fantasy elements as seen throughout their writing and other novels. The hinted possible fusion of the “game” and “reality” hints to more elements to be revealed about the world and universe at large that Pancakes has constructed in their other novels. While having read the other novels provides more insight into these foreshadowing elements it is not require at all in order to understand and enjoy this novel. The pacing of this story may seem slow to those that enjoy quick paced and action packed stories. The slower pace of this novel really fits the characters and the world in my opinion. As I mentioned earlier the slice of life elements and action come together to form in my opinion a cohesive plot line. Pancakes has great update stability, and in my time as a reader of theirs I cannot remember a time that they missed an update ever. In terms of writing quality grammatical errors are few and quite rare, however my own grammatical knowledge isn’t the greatest. Give the novel a try!
Soccer novels are great! Systems that aren't completely ridiculous are great! Fun novel in general. (Word filler word filler word filler word filler word filler word filler)
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overall good need further chapter to find out how awesome it is..........................hopefully it will keep up the quality and introduce new elements