I think this is a book worth reading. It's consistent, has character growth with well defined personalities, and makes you anxious to read the next chapter just to find out what happens next. I also like how the author takes his time to gradually build the harem. It's not a rushed story and a lot of thought is put into it.The MC really needs to start taking charge of his secretary however and add her. He's a dunce when it comes to women but he's a take charge guy who does what needs to be done for the betterment of all. His stupidity when it comes to women is a bit out of place as a high profile CEO. CEOs should be good in dealing with men and women to have a successful business. This so far, is the only negative I see about the MC. He needs to sleep with his secretary.
Good job author. Keep it up. ..........................................................................................................................
this one is very very Bad and No Point in me telling you why exatly because Author will delete the comment Like the Others that pointed it out.
One of the worst novels I have ever read. The mc teams up with other people which although makes sense has much less pros compared to cons. Firstly, although it hasn’t been mentioned why the mc would wanna team up with them. But if we were to assume that the teaming up would have only one benefit that it would help prevent exposing his other pets. But at the same time he wouldn’t be able to level up his own pets. Secondly even though they are willing to share exp right now, what about future. Shouldn’t he rather try to level up his own pets. Also, the mc was focusing on leveling up only a single pet which also happens to be a weaker one, rather than trying to level up all of them which would be much more beneficial.
A really good original novel that you won’t regret giving a read. Writing Quality - Not much to say about this because there are rarely any obvious mistakes I can pickup on.Stability of Updates - There are regular updates (Though, there are never enough chapters when you really enjoy a story).Story Development - I like the current development of the story and you can tell the author is either well read or has done some research into the current specifics of the story. I would like to have a closer look at the actual system and the main uses of it for the MC, because at the moment the most important aspects I can think of are the map and crafting. It feels like he has been neglecting his responsibilities as a Lord in his own territories and I would like to see his making better use and giving a better look into the running of his current lands. With all the statistics available from the system I would think that he could create some medium long and easy to understand plans?Character Design - The character designs for the people that matter are well thought out. Even some side characters and the general attitudes of the nobles proves enlightening. The only thing that irritates me at times is the Main Character and his many tangents. Though, I suspect that is a design of the author on purpose. It just seems like the MC likes to jump from one thing to the next like an excited child and not being able to wait to show his efforts to all the people (Yet having nothing physical to show for that idea yet)World Background - The general lay of the world is proving to be well written. I’m not particularly well informed on polish geography and what has been established is well done, It would prove useful for the author to at some point once the MC has a stable land ownership to creat a map with the different colour coding to show who owns what (I find it helps with visualisation).Overal, a fantastic piece of work.
so what if this is fanfic? so what if this is a story based on WoW? many story such as these are still popular out there.let me name some. World of Warcraft: Foreign Realm Domination (obviously), Hail The King (diablo elements), Abe The Wizard (diablo elements), Bald Monk in The City (dnd elements), and many more on the mtl side (since i forgot most of them i wont say it) My point is. Even though they get some inspiration from famous game it is still very enjoyable, okay!What are you guys reading novel for? Arent you read novel just to find the interesting, amusing, somewhat funny part of the book? dont judge the author just because he/she adapt some elements from famous gameAs for the book, you should read this, its not in the category of epic book but atleast its enjoyable for me to wanting moar!!
Wish you luck! I need more Carla! I need more Carla! I need more Carla! I need more Carla! I need more Carla! I need more Carla! I need more Carla!
This book drew me in! I loved the explanation of the cultivation guidelines, very simple to follow. I love all the face slapping! I have read hundreds of thousands of books and I hope this author will continue to amuse a fan. I really enjoyed reading what was posted so far. I even used my coins to continue to read and I never do that, just usually use the fast pass. Great book so far, please don't drop!
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Originally I gave this story a 1.8 after the first 12 chapters then the next chapter the author finally makes the MC better and then immediately after that makes the MC a dumb beta again lol then somehow the princess that’s trying to manipulate him somehow gets a group of teenagers summoned to the MCs world to save them...honestly if I could rate this 0/5 I would
Well the character is not too stupid or an 'angel' like which is the best for me and I personally love the story. Don't regret reading it! ????❤️???