Woah! This book has huge potential! This is a totally new trope! Very few grammar mistakes. An enjoyable read. I definitely recommend this book!You are a very good writer! keep making more chapter! looking forward to it!
The premise is great. The whole idea of a boy opposing heaven and stealing from it is also quite fun. The problem lies in its execution. The grammar and flow are all over the place with little to no flow. It makes reading a struggle completely pulling you out of the novel's world and stopping you from getting immersed. Flow is unfortunately a concept in writing that takes time to perfect even for native English speakers so it is just something that the author requires more practise at.
The main character is extremely irritating to me and so are the side characters. There is barely any world building and the dialogue is super forced. If the interaction between characters wasn’t so forced it might help with how much I dislike the character.
This story was quite unique and I totally loved it, the way events are written and the characters kept me hooked throughout the chapters, good work, can't wait to find out more in upcoming chapters ❤️❤️❤️❤️
I'll say this, the story is interesting as far as the whole narrative beats and everything but the grammar, sentence structure, and punctuation hold this story back heavily. If the author can clean that up. I think the novel will be even more enjoyable.
tho book is absolutely amazing ? and it has a certain set up that makes it both extremely easy to guess and read well also being able to surprise you.
a great read.even the seemingly 'ordinary' and 'mundane' things are written so well that I just couldn't stop reading until it finished!and it's not even fiction!and the pics are too good, i can imagine how good of a place u visited.it's just great.author-san, i now know that i need a trip to beach and farms to get some relief from this stressful life.
Translation is absolutely unacceptable, Horrid, and terrible.
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Can anyone dislike a story that has the Legendary Truck Kun in it!? The answer is NO!! At least not me.Author, you've succeeded in gaining my interest from the very first chapter. I loved the way Villin is so composed when he dies as though him reincarnating and transmigrating is a given.MC is trying hard to learn about the new place he is in rather than being all-knowing and OP from the very start. Plus he's smart and has chosen his skills wisely.You've managed to get a few chuckles out of me so kudos to that!Will definitely continue to read more of your work in the future. Great Job!
Here is my honest review XDThe story telling is amazing and im loving the wacky ideas. The plot seems to progress nicely and the character development seems steady and well paced.There are a few grammar mistakes in terms of tenses and word choice but those are passable. If you need deeper information just message me.I love the story so far and am looking forward to reading more.(At the time of this review only 9 chapters had been published)