Good read, just wished chapters were posted more regularly ?
Really I wanna have a writing skills like yours
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I am 89 out of 89 chapters in, and this is a great book so far. The world building is solid, you are instantly thrown into the story and can quickly grasp the situation and understand the stakes. As things are explained, you don’t feeling like you are being talked down to, or your intelligence as a reader is being underestimated. Even when things are being overtly explained, I feel connected to the world and want to learn more. A lot of stories deal with monster hunter turned monster, and there are a variety of ways the character can come to terms with it. This story finds a nice balance in that, between nature vs. nurture and a certain level of supernatural influence. I feel connected to Luciel and his journey. As well as to his relationships, both vampiric and human. He believes a balance cannot be struck between the two sides, while trying to maintain that balance in his own life. It’s a good concept and I’m genuinely rooting for him. My only qualm with this story is the system. When it feels like every story you read has the system troupe, it was refreshing to see one without it. So when it got added, I was a bit disappointed. That being said, I honestly don’t think it takes away from the story. While this system is just like any other, compared to other stories with systems, it fits in nicely. The system is flavored in such a way that makes sense rather than being an author’s shortcut to presenting information. It fits within the context of the story. While I believe that the story could work without having a system, especially considering we made it 86 chapters before it was introduced, I also don’t think it will take away from the story either. I am interested to see how it will affect things moving forward. If you are like me, at least wait till chapter 89 before making your final judgement on the system. There is one simple sentence there that convinced me on it. All that being said, I highly recommend this story, it ticks all the right boxes. Go ahead and give it a shot!
I absolutely love this novelAlex, ethan literally all characters are amazing the plot is nice and the world-building is perfect.???????????????
This is such a cool story with an amazing concept that I've honestly never seen before. Kinda reminds me of JJK because of how only a select few can see the spirits. One issue I have is that in one paragraph, it sounds like Shakespeare wrote this and in the next, a random person. Dialogue is amazing, action is pretty good too but you don't need more than one exclamation mark or question mark to make the character seem like he's shouting. Good book tho
Hmmmmm. where do I start. First I have read to Chapter 41. Frankly, these chapters were among the most boring chapters in my life, but since it is the author's first novel, let's forgive him. The biggest problem I faced was the stretching of events, the large number of disgusting dialogues, the large stuffing of information, and the writer's attempt to enter the drama and (psychological) element, and these two fields are needed A writer with great experience, and I doubt that he is still in the last chapter he has published. The hero is still 10 years old, and the storytelling method was terrible. It made me sleep. There is no suspense in the events (note this from my point of view.)
I came to withdraw my critical criticisms the mc he didn't go to Portugal but the mc doesn't need to win everything at the beginning he can go through some problems and mature I think it's better but I'm not a writer you know my opinion I love it so that's it
It was a nice read. I think I need more chapters asap author ?. BTW, how do you create such amazing font for your novel title? They look really impressive! ?
An epic new system novel where power, strategy, and unexpected twists collide! Follow the MC's rise with a unique system that defies all limits. Must-read!" ??
this has to be the worst translation I've ever seen the story would be much better if it actually made sense
I love this book already ?Few chapters in and I'm hooked !!!The scenes are so detailed I need More chapter!!!Keep updating I'm following