Kalli is the cunty girl indeed hehe. Though might lowkey resonate with her mommy too. Pleaseee keep posting and I will genuinely be out of my reading block.
Some reasons that I know that my book is an average book which some people may like is that it has a lot of suspense. It really goes through those stages of little events that happen before something big comes up, the quality of the details in my opinion is that it explains some moments you might not be able to imagine more thoroughly in my book. Every newbie should be given a chance and so far, I think that my book is doing good.
Author here, its my first time writing a game novel. So i hope you let me know how you find it and if any improvements can be made. The novel will be focused on the Aramageddon and on reality. It won’ be fixed only on the game, reality will also have crucial and significant impact on the Mc’s life. The novel will also have romance, and some sort of slice of life into it. The mc is just 14 years old whilst his sister is 15, so don’t expect him to do everything perfectly although he isnt dumb and will mostly pick the right decision. The mc is op, but the pacing will be slow to medium, do let me know if you like it or hate it. Ask any questions here, and thank you for reading this far.
Looks good for now... also world background good too and plot just good hope you continue the story and continue this plot to see what the end have
I used all my fastpass and coin on this one and it was worth it.
I’m reviewing this book for the free fast pass.
If you Likeop mc fast Progress fast Story fast lvl upBig HaremAlpha mcthan you will Love this.
So far I like it you said you didn’t know where you’re going with this I hope my comment is helpful
Pretty good novel, but would you mind updating the discord link from illustrations? Its not working (even if I try to write it) it says that its either expired or that I might not have permission to join.
Gave it a slight hit on world background but everything else is great. As someone who has started to hate system novels this one is not too intrusive a system. Only bad part is there are too few chapters.
it Just felt strange that there were so many negative reviews and most of them are complaining about... things that the author mentioned in his tags, like wtf? this story Is great, the MC Is a savage, he's mad shit Crazy, and fiiiiinally a really depraved MC, i hate when in the description they write "EXTREME SEX, I WARN YOU, IN THIS NOVEL THERE ARE SOME CRAZY FETISH, YOU THOUGHT COULDN'T EXIST" and then, it's the most boring vanilla shit i had ever read. Another thing, this author can write women, my God i hate when other authors are like "ehm She Is in her 40's but she looks 18" no She fucking don't, have you ever seen a woman? this author describes MILFs as what they are... MOMS! i don't want a "MILF" that looks like 20, i want a milf to be in her 30's 40's and looks like her Age! God... sigh, other then this, the women here are not some brainless corpse of flesh (i mean they become one After the MC brainwash them), they have emotion, they are smart (not as much as our MC tho), they are powerful and with strong and relevant background. Sorry for the long paragraph, but one last thing, here the women have diversity, they are from various etnic groups, they have different body-shape (even tho they are all sex bombs, the author trys to differentiate) different hair-style. Ok that's all, Sorry for the long paragraph, and continue this way author, don't listen to the negative comments.
The progression of the story keeps me guessing on what would happen next. Not predictable at all. Keep it going author ✍️ I can’t wait to see what happens between Tahira and khan..