There is so much not going on it’s crazy. 80% system rewards seems low and the overall world building does not give you any reason to root for the MC. After 20 chapters, I was rooting for a guard.
first of all I want to say that I enjoy your novel, I like the Mc kindhearted nature that being said I have a few issues that you might want to address ?. 1) despite mc previous knowledge being that he went to college and all even if he didn't study it his lack of common sense is terrible, I mean who makes some national tier potion and sells it dirt cheap. He didn't think about his unique background being the son of a goddess having an effect on everything he does, yes its kind and nice to give away these OP potions but think about all the alchemist that slave away trying to make a decent potion to earn a living and mc comes and destroyed all their hard work. Usually alchemy is a hard profession and people face many failures but mc has no such problems so what happens when in town A you worked hard to make a low grade potions and sell them for 8 copper but you hear a rumor that town B has a godlike potion being sold for the same price, I don't need to spell it out, yes it kind of him to do so, but his kindness is hurting others business and livelihood. 2) Power scale is weird, Idk how mc struggle against the goblin king and ran out of mana I get he is back to being 12 and all and he new to this world but I would imagine having all the mana should amount to some insane strength not to mention his previous knowledge as even the goddess said he'll be stronger than others; and the spider queen being 600 years old she should be a godlike existence maybe not as strong a dragon or other races in the same tier as her but she should definitely wipe out enemies like flies other than her contemporaries
This book changed my life. I am so honored to be blessed by the pure knowledge and brilliance of this book. It is truly genius how you weaved togeather bread and isaeki so wonderfully. Maybe, the true bread was the friends we made along the way. I truly recommend to everyone who can see this. Read this whole book, support the artistic genius of this author.
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easy to read, intriguing world mysteries, interesting game world with its own separate (?) mysteries, funny and heartwarming character moments
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After a very long time finally there's a good novel option to read and wait for it.. The writing was good, there was no problem in translation, story line was not rushed and characters seems have some depth I truly hope it get picked and continue in same way...
isnt this “sent to a parallel demon world with magic) or sum like that? (Forgot the whole name) but its been out i want to say 4 a tear now.
I've read 91 chapters. Love the idea. Hate the execution and pace.The development is sooo ssllooowww, and the horrible update schedule just makes it worse. I don't expect him to be a god among men by now, but a system should provide more growth at a faster rate. After nearly 100 chapters, Jay still seems weak. When compared to other similar novels, the progress is much more tangible in every other novel I've seen. He has basically only used his system powers THREE times in 91 chapters! Also, the powers he does obtain with the system seem to grow at the normal rate of needing YEARS of honing.Then there is the issue of making small advances seem huge. Jay can now mildly sense what his parasites feel which gives him a low-powered danger warning sense and the ability to sense the strength of opponents. He can also slightly buff or very mildly influence someone infected with his parasites. He basically has 3 very normal protagonist skills. The author acts like these are insane gains in ability when they're really bland.In 91 chapters, he should have used his system multiple times, should have several skills, and should have tangible growth. The author may as well have left the system and parasites out at this rate, and just made the novel about a guy with 3 normal abilities instead of the usual one per person.
first of all, don't make this cringe, and second of all give it some slice of life moment to enjoy the world and make the mc have some level of common sense,don't make him like [ you dare to hit me now I kill you literary] don't make him have a harem, and most importantly don't make him unsatisfied with what he gains,make him smart where he uses the most efficient way to increase his power,don't give the skip training instant power moment, in this kind of novel progress of every moment make us happy and make him smart enough to finding new way to make him strong and earn some money.if you are saying that it became suspicious then I will tell you some thing instantly attaining power is more suspicious and if he work other area and work on his power he will gain power and money and most importantly knowledge and experience.
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A very interesting story with great characters and interesting settings. The pacing is great and the sentences flow well, conveying the story and the characters aptly. I especially enjoyed the system mechanics and the level grinds and the calm and collected, yet funny MC is always a joy to read. The writing in the earlier chapters could surely use some work, but I took a look at the more recent ones and can say that the quality surely improves! Amazing work!