So far I’m really liking the story. Fl is out for vengeance and throwing punches the entire way. So far not much interaction with the ml but I like that’s he’s secretly obsessed with her. Cant wait to see what happened with him after she died in her previous life.
Bro try to tell us more about realms...What powers they have...What changes occur after reaching new realms . And creare some scenes where when he upgrade and he feels that power is running throw his viens..Or different scenes like this...Which will make it interesting... As You is writting it looks like that he is upgrading and he doesn't feel anything... No changes in his body...and no good information about Cultivation Relams.. I have only Read uptill chap 12 .. and reviewing about the things i havr read till 12 chaps...
Rating this book a 5-Star, because why not? I simply love the way I'm able to relate with the characters and picture the scenes in my head. The plot is so interesting, and it always has a major cliffhanger that keeps me turning at the end of every chapter. Honestly, you're doing well authoress P Star. Keep it up. Also, I love the fan name, 'Starlites'. Write on authoress???
This is so coooooollllcan't wait for more chapters???
Just wondering you going to go futher then the other adaption on here called God emperor instead of Eternal God emperor.
Hello dear readers, it is I, the author. After having written so far, I feel llike I can finally leave a review(shamelessly hehehe...)I just want to say the book's world background, character design, story develop, and writing quality are all great, although this is my first webnovel, I really writing it just as much as you enjoy reading it. I'm going to write more and y'all are going to be reading more.I'm working on improving certain aspects like writing quality and update stability.Regardless, it's a great read so please, TRY IT OUT!!
Everything is good but the MCs. Basically their interaction is meant to be funny but it isn't at all. It's was funny at the start but until when are we supposed to find their bratty dispute funny, One is god knows how old he is and the other is more than 30 years old, and they can't get over their first misunderstanding, They keep arguing and fighting with each other like some snotty toddlers.
I've just finished reading the most recent chapter, and I must say that it's an intriguing novel. I also really like the characters and the setting of the islands. I hope the author can keep up.I'll grant that the previous chapters weren't as strong, but you shouldn't evaluate a book by its first few chapters. I hope any new readers will give the book a shot. The desert arc is where I really started to enjoy it.
Very, very confusing plotline, many spelling mistakes in the chapters forcing you to re-read something thinking that you were just being stupid. The chapters jump from being a medieval society to refining oil in about 10 chapters and within the next few chapters having diggers and producing industrial piping and whatnot. The kingdom building aspect of this novel is alright and has some well-thought foundation building for a modern city.
This is the first novel of this genre that I have ever read, and this actually made me interested in the storyline of this novel. Overall, I think this novel is good. Keep it up! Good Luck!
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