The novel is very good, but the childhood period is kind of annoying, especially when the hero of the novel is kind of arrogant. I wish I could give him a fistful of love from One Piece.
Chapter 29 reads so far: First off, me? I personally got impressed with the action scenes, and the work was clearly not written by an amateur. I mean, the skills are beyond an average author. Though there's a little resemblance to ORV, but not to the point you'll call it a cheap copy; it's super original.
Also, the guy obviously took his time planning every chapter. Good word usage, not a cringe or simping MC... MC is probably a second God, 'cause I see one person being described like an absolute chaos, so you'll have to read it to find yourself. The plot scenes and dialogue seem real enough; honestly, it's a really interesting read which I'm still reading.
I believe you're very good at your ascent, something I envy, so keep working on that.
reading novel with incubus thing is not really my type but when i read this novel this really hype me up, over all this story was so entertaining and amazing!!!!, i'll add this to my library!! i'm rooting for you dear author!
It's awesome and amazingly accurate but the mc should have learnt ahead
If I must say, this story is great! I love it already.Please update more ??❤
A nice story plot author, really commendable.
A solid world background with a very interesting and we'll written story. It's very easy to understand and follow up with what was being told in every chapter, even though I'm not that familiar with some terms and places. Overall, I hope this book get more attention from the readers. Keep working on it, Author.
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the story is great and very entertaining. it has a strong "Lord of the mysteries" vibe so if you are a fan, this book will be right in your alley. characters are well designed and not shallow. Plot is well thought and complex. The only con is the English which is not perfect, otherwise this would deserve a 5/5.
So I read until it was no longer free for a reference point. Didnt see any kingdom building up to that point and Del as a character didnt really grow just got money to buy gear. I would imagine going through enough trauma would change his character in some way. Grammar needs improvements. Like saying she when talking about cassander and other minor errors. Also have not seen why stat points matter when he just uses a firearm. Wish you luck with your story
this is interesting...i’ve already done with the 6 chapters and im kinda into it, the way you personas and character interacts and all its worth the read :) but for the action part you can improve it, and i know you can do it :)
nope.. boring novel this one..drag one fight from chapter 5 all way to chapter 40???????????????????????????????