My God, read it! The first chapters are a little harder to digest, with many things happening, and a lot of information, but the setup is phenomenal! The chapter 33 is something that I would never expected. Damian is unhinged and I love him for it. I only wonder what will come next, but for one thing, I'm sure, there will be a looot.
I've seen one similar to this before I don't remember where but I keep saying it's good.
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That's good. I like the story. I love the characters. Next update.
Cool! the descriptions, imagery, and humor is well balanced. the dialogues and flow of the story are natural, too.keep going, Author-sama!!
Absolutely freaking love this novel enough to give a review which i do rarely, ok the main reason is that I don't know what to write but anyway I love it.
Good book, surprised it was well put together and wrapped up in 25 chapters.
update faster, please. thanks for the chapters
good for the start I hope it will continue
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Really great story. The excitement and challenges that a player face during all the journey makes it inspiring to read. It’s very well written. Easy to read and fun for anyone who plays or likes football or just a good story.
I’m confused about the lack of 1 stars, does author just remove reviews?Fatal flaws of this novel-Author bastardizes the narrative. Alot of the ideas are good but a lot are too drawn out, too skipped, and author LOVES lying as the narrator. Also the writing of the novel is like the author picking the writing style he likes from 1000 different novels and applying it to a certain specific paragraph each time. Author has no consistent style. Am I getting Japanese Beta MC or Xianxia ruthless psycho this chapter? I don’t know!-The amount of times MC bulges his eyes each chapter. Author must have a kink for bulging eyes.-The amount of people who stutter. A trained assassin stuttering one word? Mc stutters a lot too.-The collosal amount of CRINGE.-The amount of chapters wasted for useless events. Why would they even steal food for WHAT?-Author doesnt build on how to do spells. No explanation just heres a fireball.