Very Very nice. The writing quality is awesome, Updates are regular, about once or twice per day usually. Love the story and the plot line. Plot is slowly raveling. The characters are engaging and interesting. Also, The world background is nice. I'd like the story expanded on and improved. Overall, pretty good stuff with a nice "plot".
shameless review! Join Dave on his journey to rescue the girls trapped as side characters and bring them into the folds of reborn to play the game!
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It's really good, you should read it
ang ganda ng novel mo, sana tuloy tuloy na ang pag gawa mo ng novel mo, i'm looking forward sa pag gawa mo ng libro then ipublish hehe, keep it up!