Eroyama91
The last and final simp, must my classic the book is good, and it's not gonna suddenly be dropped.I am a new writer and, it's just been 2 weeks that I started, I never wrote anything before this, and in just in these 2 weeks I can feel myself growing as a writer.I hope I continue to grow and I hope people like my work, any complaints you have just post it in chapter comments or write a review
The story telling is very good. I like the way the author made this. It's different to many war stories, mainly because it feels like it was commentary from a history book. I liked it, I hope the author continues the book. Really interesting and delightful. I wonder what will happen next. I will be waiting.
I really liked the first 800 chapters but now the author is just trying to meet the word count and writing a lot of unnecessary stuff which honestly doesn't help the story much. Well without all that it's a pretty decent story for passing time
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I really enjoyed reading this novel, even tho their are some filler chapters which i hate. There is harem which i usually don’ t read but it’s not heavily focusedThings u shou expect when u read this are..-Harem (as of now there are mainly three female leads, there probably will be more tho)-fast cultivation(relative to other cultivators, but still very fast for readers)insane/ fighter maniac mc (he get calmer when he get stronger)OP cheat(this cheat is my favorite female lead)Status: 536 (i read the raw novel)
I.. I am but a passerby. I will leave my mark on this novel to save readers from death. This novel is very good. It combines 'OP' with plot. I highly recommended your read it. Please like so more see this.
Super funny also nice touch of humour the Mc is not a harem or bump into and make out with every female type thankfully but that’s probably what’s bringing down the ratings besides bots and people who only like the blandest of story’s with an mc that has a harem, is stupid and rapes female’s every chance he gets
an overall wholesome cultivation novel with good plot and character design . it has a good chance to continue forward and be famous but wonder why author himself doesn't want to continue it and taking a break instead
Even though there are a lot of stories in this genre but this one is unique of them all, the author has done a good job in describing everything, best of luck with writing further~~
157 read. the hero has very, very, very small balls ... and the most useless character is vanessa. in addition to the promotion and the raid, it could (and even should) be left behind the scenes. and yes - there is too much "sugar" in the whole story))).
It's a decent system book, and I like the ML. However, sometimes the writing style can be a little off, but for the most part it's good.I'm curious to see where this goes.
Now, this doesn t deserve the 5 stars, i enjoyed it, but it s not even 3 starsWriting qualityIt s well, quite bad, in a chapter the translator user "young daoist priest" like 10 times in a chapter, and a lot of words are just used again and again instead of changing them and making the story feel more smoothly and have a diversity.. a lot of stuff seem out of place too, i think the translator is quite lazy, but i still gave it 3 stars as it s readable and not many grammar mistakes. Story developmentNow i gave it 3 stars, it s moving quite well, not that fast and not slow either, as far as i read he already got the first expansion, and did some stuff there and there, although everyone seems to either attack him or not attack him, it s lacking regarding that and especially characters. Character designNow, i only gave it 1 star because, all of them beside like 3 people are 1 dimensional, and those who aren t, their way of talking feels forced, they say stuff they shouldn t do, they do stuff they shouldn t do, it s just out of place.. And we don t even know the blood demon's name at the chapter i left (like 39). Update stabilityWell, i started reading this yst, and from then till now there s no new update, it s been almost 2 days already, but i still gave it 3 stars. World backgroundI don t rlly know what to say here, not too much not too less, we know where this happens, what s around it, i still don t know or i didn t understand about the sects around, where they are located and stuff like that, neither we know the planet we re located, overall it s quite average so i gave it 3 starsOverall 2.6
