All in all, this novel is a nice read. You can tell that the author is just getting his bearings in the professional writing world, as there are some grammar and spelling issues.But mostly, it's just forgetting to pluralise words and sometimes a word will be missing the last letter, but you can still make sense of what they're trying to say.It's a typical reincarnation story featuring Arthur Grimwood, a boy of humble origins who got a second chance at life after leading a pretty miserable existence before his death.I've read several system novels and written one myself, so I understand them quite well, and Su5h1 has made a system that holds both more and less information than the usual one, including things that are possible to achieve, yet not attained.There are just a couple of gaps in realism which cause you to make a double-take.There were only eight chapters when writing this review, but I think you should give it a chance and keep an eye on the author and their future works as well, because they may achieve great things!
Beautiful and nice characters, I can’t wait for Chris’s happy ending
A story with an enigmatic and impressive plot
I want this person to keep going with this, there is definitely an audience for it. Nothing more, just encouragement. Thank you for sharing your art with us.
Rewriting another review and deleting the previous one, you seriously are doing well, everyone else are talking about the backstories but I loved the action, 33 chapters and not a disappointment, not bad at all, the mc is good, and also this story is going to be long so everything cannot be judged at once, so I'll keep checking out to see any update and read it.
reward . .
This is a very good read. It doesn’t drag on and is very interesting Lots of twists and turns. But very well written with great emotional depth give it a try I hope toRead more by this author
Update the book as soon as possible Asap
please continue and don't drop it ? there are not many Mahabharata story
I like it when in a novel, we can get everything. Fight, business, sports and many more. I hope you continue this series. Keep it up, author.
Nice Novel I'm looking forward for future chapters
the best sports novel translation on the app for sure