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Shameless review here. The start will definitely be slow, I will do my best to spice things up here and there so please read it until Priscilla meets Mika. I appreciate your patience!
Fantastic work and cant wait for more. Definitly give it a try i promise this novel won't let you down.
Good Luck with the story. hope it does good
This novel has incredible potential—I can already feel the depth and creativity pouring from its pages. The story is captivating, and I’m eagerly looking forward to seeing where it goes. Author, you’re doing an amazing job; keep up the fantastic work! I’m rooting for you and can’t wait to read more!
the entire first part with his family? trash like totally weird... BUT...Dun dundun it picks up and now it's not just readable its awesome... to those who read shattered innocence and survived the first 50 ch I'm telling u to do the same for this one
I like it. I'm adding it to my library to read more later...
this book is just as awesome as awesome can get. I love it. waiting for you bro
Wow!This is such a beautiful novel. Very interesting, it feels so real, the fictional characters that played each part seems to come to life .Good job author!! This is definitely worth recommending.
write more pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
The storyline is going well. Recommended ❤️
Hello, Author here with a shameless review. Now that I'm approaching 40 chapters, I thought it would be time to drop a review here. First off, thank you so much for taking the time to dive into my story! This is my first time writing an original Webnovel, so there may issues regarding worldbuilding, plot etc. I genuinely didn't realise how hard it was to develop things like worldbuilding without info dumping, lets hope I get better with it in the future. I mentioned this in the synopsis but just to reiterate. there will not be any romance in this story. I learned from writing my fanfic that I'm not built for writing romance. Additionally, the MC is not reincarnated or transmigrated, he's indigenous to the main world in the story. He starts off as a normal kid, so don't expect him to be ruthless and calculative right from the start- that transformation will happen very soon. Also, something I didn't mention in the synopsis is that the story will contain world hopping- i.e. the MC will travel to different worlds over the course of the story. Finally, constructive criticism is of course welcome and encouraged. Once again, thank you for reading my work. I sincerely hope you enjoy the journey!