Velstad
From what I could read the story was subpar. The characters are annoying. The translator looks like he ran this through a bad mtl then edited it wrong. Overall the novel is 1 star and that is because I can’t give it a lower score
I definitely enjoy this story, however, I have stopped reading it. The cost of the chapters is very high for their length and the author adds unnecessary advertising at the end of each chapter that pads the word count. 9 tokens a chapter for such short chapters feels like a ripoff. The cute baby talk spelling gets tiring at some point as well.
1st mission: “Penalty for failure: Death”The story is great but the author really has no idea how to create tension. Every single character will be railroaded into a forced path and there will be no decission making, you will always know what will happen next. However it is at least an decently interesting path.Great story and concept. But the author just never leaves any possibility for alternate paths or ”what if” questions. Anything important was always going to happen the exact way it happened because the author only left one path for the story to continue.
Absolutely standard story, where the main character gets everything out of great luck .. He is constantly lucky and does not understand at all how this or that action leads to its improvement, which is funny because knowledge is not added, but the ambition grows like clockwork. The licking of the ass of the main character is incredibly shocking when he demounts his cheating ability in absolutely inappropriate places, in this work this is found in almost every chapter. In general, for 50 chapters, it only becomes clear that he does not live in a military camp, but in a licking camp. Nothing is clear about the world at all. About the story of the characters and their elaboration - they all lick asses for everyone who is older in rank or have skills, absolutely all characters up to chapter 54 inclusive, there are no proud ones. In general, the story of chapter 54 causes sickening urges. I do not advise people who are friends with the logic of things, here you will not find it.
One of the best books on this app. MC isn't an overpowered monster. Great character development. It really reminds me of when I first started playing MMORPGS .
This novel is... Questionable? But I think the theme of the novel fits on how deranged the mc and how I take this... world? Okay, its pretty good itself except for some questionable parts. It’s good
So if you've not looked at the tag and clicked on Hollywood one you should. This story is posted on Oct 30.....another story which is LITERALLY the same exact one almost except a few minor background details was posted weeks earlier....so either this dude is that author too or well he just copied and pasted and change some background and name details....I read the other one first and 13 chapters in this one is same basically so far including the time in history it starts, movies and child author.....
Why the hell can they not put in a synopsis for the stories instead of this useless crap. More and more are getting like this.
Overall it was pretty much just like a summary of what happened and for me that really likes world building and kingdom building/with machines similar to the novel mechanical god emperor it would have been nice if he went more into detail in the beginning if it went to a different direction with more like a dedicated volume one rebuilding earth and volume 2 wormhole to another world appears would be so much better imo but nah he wakes up and rebuilds earth in 2 chapters so no build up or momentum in the story so its very bland but i like the concept as i view it as a rts game like stellaris not sure what future chap has in store but already disappointed in lack of details and fleshing out the story.
