Author here, this story is my first time doing one. It's slower than most stories due to my writing style. However, I think you will still enjoy it.
? Hello, ? Everyone Author is speaking, please if you have any suggestions or if I make any mistakes that you've noticed I appreciate it if you pointed it out I would love to get better as this is my first work
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Perfect? please don’t drop it...........
hi, nice chapters thanks.Please increase on the release ..oops it can't be helped.The story flow is nice and promising in my pov and please if possible include divine beings like Godesses,angels,.............. please
World Idea, great ? Timely Updated as well...Rest is meh... I really wanted to read it, but it gets really bad and forced as it goes further... The whole thing with his 'so-called family' was just a painful drama to read that I gave up... If I have to give a suggestion then I would say that the tone of writing in many parts of the story is straight up depressing... Yes, many parts require that sort of writing but overuse of such writing isn't the best...
This story is a masterpiece—every aspect, from the immersive world-building to the rich character development, is woven together with such care and detail. The storytelling captivates with its depth and creativity, making it a journey worth following to the very end. I truly hope the author sees this remarkable work through, delivering an ending as meaningful and extraordinary as the story itself.
this book has potential just hope author improves his grammar and flesh out characters more and don't drop this book
Great Story! The development of the story is also not monotonous and handsome, recomend The development of the story is also not monotonous and cool, recomend
Read if you like :Family bonding, deep dark secrets, coherent and immersive writing.Don’t read if:You’re bothered by supernatural evil since there are quite a few elements. (Not a spoiler since I didn’t specify). Golden thumb check.Secret identity check.Overprotective family check.Note: The story went dark quickly, yet still had humor. If only my inner religious child didn’t scream. Well, anyways my two cents
Shameful Author review HereIt's always a bit tricky writing a review for your own story, so I'll keep it short and simple. If you’re curious about anything in the novel, feel free to drop your questions in the comments!I'll do my best to respond to meet everyone expectations.
I am trying to change the recommended algorithm to stop suggesting these. I do not have anything against this genre as a whole, but I want the recommendations to be something I am more likely to read and this just got caught in the crossfire